MerRetirees...hahaha

chrisaakins

Here is a more concrete pencil sketch. How is the composition? I know there are several tangents that I can clean up later. I feel like some of the negative space could be filled with little odds and ends but I have no idea what else you might find at a Florida resort. Any ideas? I am kind of doing this as a draw fifty things. I would cheat though and count the landscaping items and furniture.

ArtofAleksey

Oh ok this makes more sense idk why it thought you were going to make the scene underwater... I think most of it looks good. I would re-evaluate your right side though. That one mermaids head is cut off by the paper, move it in a bit? And why is that potted plant there? I don’t think it brings anything to the image, maybe a little table with a drink? Or perhaps a servant human behind the counter? Or crabman? The squiggly lines between the foreground and background what are you planning to make that? Bushes? Otherwise good rough composition.

chrisaakins

@Aleksey the potted plant is for the tropical feel of a resort. I think if I moved the sunning grandpa over toward the table in front of the plant it would read better. Also...pool noodles. I could add pool noodles.

ArtofAleksey

@chrisaakins alright, you’re the decision maker, but you already have palm trees, and the little stand to give you the resort feel. Not to mention the recliners, pool, and beachball!

chrisaakins

@Aleksey yeah. I confess I mostly added to fill the negative space.

ArtofAleksey

@chrisaakins oh ok. What else can you do to fill in that space?

JerrySketchyArt

If you want a Florida retirement home, you need a shuffleboard court.

chrisaakins

@JerrySketchyArt true, but how do merpeople play shuffleboard?

ArtofAleksey

@chrisaakins shuffleshell? Maybe volleyball with their fins?

JerrySketchyArt

@chrisaakins I don't even know how humans play shuffleboard. I've got the Floridian down, but not the retired part.

ArtofAleksey

I’m just picturing you spying on the elderly in retirement homes with a notepad and pen

chrisaakins

So I don't really know what I am doing with Photoshop. I really want to get the blended gradient effect that others create in their forms, but I don't know how to do it aside from the wet blender brush tool. Even then it works better on pencils than the "oils". Any suggestions how to make the nice blended forms that people like @Eric-Castleman gets on his forms in PS?

Here is the WIP. I am sort of jumping all over the place. I know some people work methodically but and finish each layer but I am really just playing around and experimenting.

Also @Chip-Valecek when you say "punch up the color. How does one do that in PS?

One more thing. I really love the complaining Granny in the background. She is probably my favorite character here.

Lastly, this is a cropped version. Just to show what I have been working on,

Chip Valecek

@chrisaakins the last few things I do to any painting...

Create a layer and fill it all with black. Set it to color dodge and then take a cool bright blue color and with 20% opacity on the brush I will hit some of the colors I really want to pop. This is a Will Terry trick I learned from his Digital Painting course.

After I add my texture layers my colors seem to get muted, so I add an adjustment layer for levels and an adjustment layer for hue/saturation. I will play around with those till I like what I see. Most of the time the saturation slider goes up to about 12+ and with the levels I make sure to bring out my whites again.

chrisaakins

@Chip-Valecek thanks! I will try that! Is the digital painting course one of the live classes or is it a video course?

Chip Valecek

@chrisaakins it was one of the first one's they put out. I think its called 10 steps to digital painting. Its not a live course.

chrisaakins

Here is my progress so far. I am cracking up at the fat merman getting a sunburn. Must be a good book. Any ideas for titles? I was thinking Old Man and the Sea... hehehe.

I am having a good time working slowly on this work. How are you liking it so far?

ArtofAleksey

Those sqiggles in the baack what are they??

chrisaakins

@Aleksey a hedge of bougainvillea. To keep the riffraff out.

chrisaakins

More work on the background. I am wondering if this may be a stronger piece than my merman that I already posted. I don't know at this point.

chrisaakins

Here is some more progress. I really like the umbrella. I am not sure I captured the light and shadow under the umbrella but when I darkened the faces of the mergrannies under the umbrella it looked weird, so I lightened up their backs instead. Did that work?