Does this Look Like a Snowboard? The Collaborative Book Project for Will
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Yey! Thanks so much you all! It looks great! I reckon texture wins! I also darkened the bindings a bit so they were not quite so loud. I also desaturated the red backpack straps a bit.
Comparing the very first one (left) to the latest edited one on the right. The snowboard looks much better. I think the bindings were a big key.
I'm about ready to call it done. I believe I have until May 15 till I have to turn it in. So drop any more suggestions if ya feel like it.
Thanks again to everyone who put in input
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@Squirrelsize I've liked this piece all along but I think your changes really helped. The bindings now tie in with everything else and the letters on the snowboard don't compete with the sun. Really beautiful.
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@Squirrelsize This turned out really sweet. I can't think of any major suggestions
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@Squirrelsize very nice!
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I love it! It's so atmospheric!! I don't have anything to add though, the way the board attaches was what I would have said
But that's fixed now!
