Does this Look Like a Snowboard? The Collaborative Book Project for Will
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@Squirrelsize Looking great!
Another thing, did you changed the opacity of your snow? It looks like we can see the hidden part of the snowboard. If it's a shadow, maybe change it a little bit so it reads without ambiguity. -
@marine Oh yeah, I added the shadow, but yeah, it does look like part of the board. I'll fix that. Thanks girl!
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I'm loving the graphic design feel to this piece. And the desaturated colors fit really well with the mood of the image. So calm and peaceful.
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Okay, Shadow fixed.
Also How do you all like the texture?
The first one has texture and the second is without.
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I think I prefer a little texture.
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Very sweet. Love the image. I like the texture!
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I too, like the texture and the entire picture. Beautiful and peaceful feeling.
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With texture. Great image, very well done and I love the idea!
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I am not sure if the bindings should be that bright, since they are on the backside of the board? At least they should get darker in the lower region
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@mellebluesworld Hmmm, I was actually wondering the same thing. I decided to let it pickle overnight and look at it with fresh eyes in the morning. Looking at it now, and yep, I agree with you. I'll mess around with that and see what I can do
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Yey! Thanks so much you all! It looks great! I reckon texture wins! I also darkened the bindings a bit so they were not quite so loud. I also desaturated the red backpack straps a bit.
Comparing the very first one (left) to the latest edited one on the right. The snowboard looks much better. I think the bindings were a big key.
I'm about ready to call it done. I believe I have until May 15 till I have to turn it in. So drop any more suggestions if ya feel like it.
Thanks again to everyone who put in input
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@Squirrelsize I've liked this piece all along but I think your changes really helped. The bindings now tie in with everything else and the letters on the snowboard don't compete with the sun. Really beautiful.
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@Squirrelsize This turned out really sweet. I can't think of any major suggestions
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@Squirrelsize very nice!
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I love it! It's so atmospheric!! I don't have anything to add though, the way the board attaches was what I would have said
But that's fixed now!
