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    Finishing Drills for a Chronic Dabbler.

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    • animatosoor
      animatosoor @ShannonBiondi last edited by

      @ShannonBiondi I'm always impressed when I hear from artists who stick to the time they've set aside for creating. Kudos for doing that! As for practice time - it's probably really normal for topics to overlap and and overrun the set duration.

      Same here with the tutorials - I was so guilty of that as an art student! I was still guilty of that up to about last year or so. :face_savouring_delicious_food:

      Sometimes I really wish I could go back in time and smack myself upside the head.

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      The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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      • animatosoor
        animatosoor last edited by

        I'm going to get the ball rolling and start on this week's idea: "Toy Demon." The first two images are pages from my sketchbook, and the third is the beginnings of a digital sketch based off of the same idea.

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        The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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        • ShannonBiondi
          ShannonBiondi SVS OG @animatosoor last edited by

          @animatosoor Haha! Totally!! 😃 The beauty of hindsight, right?

          @abhainn_fionn

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          • Heather Boyd
            Heather Boyd @animatosoor last edited by

            @animatosoor

            Sounds good. I struggle with finishing but also well rendered work. I have 3-4 series work I plan to work on during the summer to stretch my Enviroment Design muscles 🙂

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            Be blessed,

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            • marine
              marine last edited by

              Thanks @animatosoor for the suggestions. I have definitely a full list of things missing in my portfolio! :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_closed_eyes:
              Thanks @Chip-Valecek , it is a really good point to work on different work at the same time to avoid getting burned out!

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              • animatosoor
                animatosoor @marine last edited by animatosoor

                @marine said in Finishing Drills for a Chronic Dabbler.:

                Thanks @animatosoor for the suggestions. I have definitely a full list of things missing in my portfolio! :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_closed_eyes:

                Hahahah, you and me both!

                Let's fill all of those gaps. It'll be an ongoing thing, I believe.

                https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

                The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                • animatosoor
                  animatosoor @ShannonBiondi last edited by

                  @ShannonBiondi Lol, yeah! :face_savouring_delicious_food:

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                  The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                  • animatosoor
                    animatosoor @Heather Boyd last edited by

                    @Heather-Boyd My struggle is exactly the same. I have gaps in my knowledge when it comes to rendering, and I find myself floundering.

                    All the best on your series! I suppose they would feature environments in a dominant way?

                    https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

                    The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                    • Heather Boyd
                      Heather Boyd @animatosoor last edited by

                      @animatosoor

                      Yeah small character for the most part and larger Enviroment around.

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                      • animatosoor
                        animatosoor last edited by

                        I'm in the process of reworking my Mermay entry as a black & white illustration for my portfolio, and,

                        animatsoorMerMay_b&w.jpg

                        • also working on this in colour!

                        ToyDemon_3.jpg

                        Any feedback would always be welcome!

                        https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

                        The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                        • animatosoor
                          animatosoor last edited by

                          My progress so far on Toy Demon. If anyone sees this and has any words of advice on rendering issues, I would really appreciate it!

                          ToyDemon_4.jpg

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                          The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                          • Darian
                            Darian SVS OG @animatosoor last edited by

                            @animatosoor looking good! is the focus on the red toy or the green creature? I'd say right now, both are getting equal importance (atleast for me 🙂 ) I think you will have to reduce the saturation of either the toy or the green creature.

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                            • animatosoor
                              animatosoor @Darian last edited by

                              Thanks for your input, @Darian! I would want the focus to be on the green creature, with the toy being a close second. I'm going to go work on the saturation. 🙂

                              https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

                              The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                              • Darian
                                Darian SVS OG @animatosoor last edited by

                                @animatosoor I would say you are close! I'd suggest de-saturating the red a little.. like in the previous image with the blue background, but to a lesser extent 🙂

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                                • animatosoor
                                  animatosoor last edited by

                                  Thanks, @Darian! I've made changes to the red on the toy, keeping the highest saturation on the creature.

                                  I also made other changes to the illustration overall, since I wasn't happy with a lot of it at its base - the toy's legs bothered me, the creature bothered me... lots of things bothered me. XD.

                                  Here's an update!:

                                  ToyDemon_5.jpg

                                  https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

                                  The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                                  • Darian
                                    Darian SVS OG @animatosoor last edited by

                                    @animatosoor yes! so much better with regards to the saturation! I like the subtle variations on the toy 👍

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                                    • animatosoor
                                      animatosoor last edited by

                                      It's Monday (where I am, anyway), and I'm about to call this done. I'd love to receive feedback on this! I've been staring at it for days, and wonder what I'm missing at this stage.

                                      ToyDemon_6.jpg

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                                      The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                                      • karolifo
                                        karolifo @animatosoor last edited by

                                        @animatosoor Looks good! The only things I can think of is to refine the shape of the shadow, and consider moving the small toy on the left a little. I feel like it is a bit uncomfortable next to the big dark toy blocks now - it could for example either be partly behind the blocks, or need more space. Or you could add a few more toys 🙂

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                                        • animatosoor
                                          animatosoor last edited by

                                          @karolifo Thank you! I ended up removing the little rattle toy completely, since it didn't sit right at all, no matter where I positioned it. It didn't work in my linework, and so it didn't work in colour either. XD I also went in and refined the shadow shape and did some other subtle fine-tuning. Thank you for helping me along. 🙂

                                          Final:
                                          ToyDemon_7.jpg

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                                          The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                                          • animatosoor
                                            animatosoor last edited by

                                            Week 2!

                                            I had these little Sandman Baby drawings sitting in my sketchbook, and it's time to bring them to a finish by hook or by crook.

                                            Sandman_sketches.jpg

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                                            The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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