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    Finishing Drills for a Chronic Dabbler.

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    • ThisKateCreates
      ThisKateCreates last edited by

      Finished another flower lady last week. Still working on the next one.
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      https://www.instagram.com/thiskatecreates

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      • animatosoor
        animatosoor @ThisKateCreates last edited by

        @ThisKateCreates I'm really liking these Flower Ladies! 🙂

        https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

        The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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        • animatosoor
          animatosoor last edited by

          Week 7:

          I'm working out solutions for this idea I have. It is going to be a series of 3 illustrations inspired by a short story I love called The Shadow. I think it's not going to be great for children story-wise, but I'm really excited about illustrating this anyhow. :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_cold_sweat:

          Exploratory sketches:
          thumbnails_small.jpg

          https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

          The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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            A Former User @animatosoor last edited by

            @animatosoor I'm liking the shapes of the figures you're creating! Best of luck with this project!

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            • animatosoor
              animatosoor @Guest last edited by

              Thank you, @Alicja-W! 😊

              https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

              The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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              • ThisKateCreates
                ThisKateCreates @animatosoor last edited by

                @animatosoor The face is really cutely drawn. Look forward to seeing it in more detail.

                https://www.instagram.com/thiskatecreates

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                • animatosoor
                  animatosoor last edited by

                  Thank you, @ThisKateCreates! 🙂

                  This is my progress so far on The Shadow. There are a number of things I'm still trying to work out at this stage: the design of the shadow, both the characters' poses and expressions, and the overall composition. In my thumbnails I've pretty much narrowed my options for composition down to what I have here, but there's still more problem-solving for me to do.

                  Any feedback would be more than welcome!

                  sketch3_small.jpg

                  shadow_1.jpg

                  I've also got to get started on the July SVS prompt, haha.

                  https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

                  The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                  • MichaelaH
                    MichaelaH last edited by

                    This looks great, the shadow...huhu hu u
                    Looking forward to your july promt idea...

                    https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                    https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                    • Nathalie Kranich
                      Nathalie Kranich last edited by

                      I am very excited to see where this is going, might need to dig out that short story! Oooooooh.

                      www.nathaliekranich.com
                      https://www.artstation.com/nathaliekranich
                      https://www.instagram.com/nathalie.kranich/?hl=en

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                      • animatosoor
                        animatosoor @MichaelaH last edited by

                        @MichaelaH Thank you, Michaela. I shall share it once I've gotten my thumbnails together, hehe.

                        https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

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                        • animatosoor
                          animatosoor @Nathalie Kranich last edited by

                          @Nathalie-Kranich You'd love it, I think, since we both love some of the creepier material out there! This one's weird, so it's perfect. XD I've this inner conflict on how much of it I should really let show in my work, lol.

                          https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

                          The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                          • Nathalie Kranich
                            Nathalie Kranich last edited by

                            Yes, me too, as you know! All depends on your market I guess! Who's the author?

                            www.nathaliekranich.com
                            https://www.artstation.com/nathaliekranich
                            https://www.instagram.com/nathalie.kranich/?hl=en

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                            • animatosoor
                              animatosoor @Nathalie Kranich last edited by

                              @Nathalie-Kranich Yes, I know! It's okay, we'll figure our inner conflicts out.

                              Hans Christian Andersen! 🤗

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                              • animatosoor
                                animatosoor last edited by animatosoor

                                Inching along with the posing and linework!:

                                shadow_3.jpg

                                I'm wondering if viewers can tell that both characters are the same person? I'm trying to work on it so they still look like each other, despite their clothing and expressions being very different.

                                I also tried to ensure the door doesn't cut right through the middle of the picture, but it's still there. :S

                                https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

                                The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                                • MichaelaH
                                  MichaelaH @animatosoor last edited by

                                  @animatosoor Hmm I didn't knwo they were the same person, the hands should be longer on the original and the eyes differ to much, but hair and style is ok. I would put the knie from the shadow guy little down and the shadows parts on the floor thinner. Maybe the beard on the ear side that it is the same for moth in angle (going up)

                                  https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                                  https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                                  • animatosoor
                                    animatosoor last edited by

                                    Thank you, @MichaelaH! I'll go work on those things. Revised sketch for now.:

                                    shadow_4.jpg

                                    https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

                                    The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                                    • animatosoor
                                      animatosoor last edited by

                                      These were as much value studies for me as they were "rendering and mood studies." I'd like the end result to have a fuzzy feel as well, especially around the shadow. I'm leaning towards #3 and #4, personally!

                                      value studies.jpg

                                      https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

                                      The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                                      • MichaelaH
                                        MichaelaH last edited by

                                        I liek 3 the best, wil be good for the mood, 4 is great also, but maybe it will be to dark? Or maybe something between 3-4

                                        https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                                        https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                                        • animatosoor
                                          animatosoor @MichaelaH last edited by animatosoor

                                          I agree, @MichaelaH. I will be going for something in between #3 and #4. Thank you. 🌻

                                          I have been doing these colour studies. I plan to do some more till I find something I really like.:

                                          colour studies.jpg

                                          Overall, though, I've run into a failure this week: It's Monday, and I'm still at the colour studies stage with this. I'm realising how much of a struggle it is for me to pose human figures properly and have them interact in a convincing way.

                                          https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

                                          The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                                          • MichaelaH
                                            MichaelaH @animatosoor last edited by

                                            @animatosoor I like 2 the best, after that maybe 6. Yeah I am also late, had to do some custom order...

                                            https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                                            https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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