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    Godzilla WIP. Feedback always welcome!

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      A Former User last edited by

      Oh wow, I actually love all 3 of your compositions, they all look so fun! I think my favourite is the robot one, i just love the kids face in the foreground and all the little details you've put in - and i've just noticed Godzilla's silhouette in the background, AMAZING!

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      • sarahlawrence
        sarahlawrence last edited by

        @Braden-Hallett I'm so glad you went with the robot one. It was my favourite, I love the godzilla silhouette in the background and your use of perspective 🙂

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        • braden H
          braden H @Chip Valecek last edited by

          @Chip-Valecek All robots are welcome as all robots are awesome 🙂

          Come oooooooon. Do the robot!

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          • braden H
            braden H last edited by

            Inks!

            Next up is using that initial value scheme and gettin' some lighting goin' on.

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            • theprairiefox
              theprairiefox @braden H last edited by

              @Braden-Hallett love the playfulness of the kids and robot. Looking good.

              -The Prairie Fox
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              • chrisaakins
                chrisaakins last edited by

                @Braden-Hallett this is a really great composition. You have really grown in your work. I thought it was great when we first met, but you are killing it. Your storytelling is phenomenal. Your style is instantly recognizable. Way to go!

                Chris Akins
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                • Mr.Rob
                  Mr.Rob last edited by

                  This is such a great piece so far. I especially love seeing all the work in progress steps.
                  Thanks for sharing.

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                  • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                    Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

                    This is amazing!

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                    • J
                      Jano last edited by

                      Robot is great, can be a great challenger, just DON'T use radioactive energy in the robot; Godzilla get stronger with that! hahaha... great composition

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                      • Jorge Valentin
                        Jorge Valentin last edited by

                        Woah awesome work! Love the different composition variations you showed there. Can't wait to see the finish version.

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                        • braden H
                          braden H @Jano last edited by

                          @Jano I suppose this is version 1.0 with atomic power 🙂 Doomed to failure!

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                          • braden H
                            braden H last edited by

                            alt text

                            I redid the inks. I'm probably the only one who can really tell the difference as usual :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_closed_eyes: I've been doing a few things to consciously try and make the linework as high quality as possible before colouring. I often fall into the 'fix it in post' mentality' which really leads to the piece suffering later on.

                            A few things I've been doing include turning off brush stabilization, working at the size the work will be viewed (so around 50%) instead of zooming in, and this time around reeeeeeally slowing down and turning off brush calibration.

                            I'm not gonna redo it again, I'm just gonna move on 🙂

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                            • lmrush
                              lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                              You are a rock star!

                              Lisa Rush
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                              • theprairiefox
                                theprairiefox @braden H last edited by

                                @Braden-Hallett It is looking nice, but I am finding the much more extensive patchwork of metal distracting. I love the stop sign touch though. It might even out more with coloring.

                                Just thought I would give you a heads up on what I am seeing.

                                -The Prairie Fox
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                                • braden H
                                  braden H @theprairiefox last edited by

                                  @theprairiefox That's good to know! Those lines'll fade away with colour and value. I'm in that strange transitional period where my linework either needs more texture or has way too much 🙂 Someday that proper middle ground'll click into place, but not today.

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                                  • braden H
                                    braden H last edited by

                                    Back to the basic value structure. Next is local value and shading.

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                                    • Heather Boyd
                                      Heather Boyd @braden H last edited by

                                      @Braden-Hallett is this photoshop CC?

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                                      Be blessed,

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                                      • braden H
                                        braden H @Heather Boyd last edited by

                                        @Heather-Boyd Corel painter 🙂

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                                        • braden H
                                          braden H last edited by

                                          Next is shading.

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                                          • lmrush
                                            lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                            OMG your process is awesome, that is why your pieces are soooo successful-thank you for sharing, and reminding me to use the techniques I have learned here at SVS

                                            Lisa Rush
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