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    Trying to develop my illustration style

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    • jwing
      jwing last edited by

      Working on developing a more simplistic/narrative-centered style, so here's a small piece i made a couple days ago 🙂 Any critique is appreciated!
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      • TessaW
        TessaW last edited by

        I love it. Great gestures, appealing characters, and a pleasing composition. My one critique is that it's suffering from a slight blurry quality that often plagues digital line work. I think it needs to be ever so slightly sharpened up.

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          A Former User @jwing last edited by

          @jwing I like the facial expression...says to me that this isn't the first nor the last time the 'time out box' will be used! 😂 I think I need one of those in my house! :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_closed_eyes:

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          • jwing
            jwing last edited by

            @tessaw Thank you! I'll try to sharpen the lineart up a bit, it does look a little blurry heh

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            • jwing
              jwing last edited by

              @lou Thank you! 😄

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              • juliepeelart
                juliepeelart SVS OG @jwing last edited by

                @jwing very cute! The gesture is spot on. On little thing, there is kind of a funny tangent where the foot meets the box. Maybe move the character back a little?

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