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    • Ace Connell
      Ace Connell last edited by

      The chicken is far better than the rabbit. The rabbit felt like it was in a different art style. I love the idea and the construction on the cow is amazing. I think the only thing letting it down now is the construction of the big. The anatomy doesn't seem right. It feels like it's got a broken neck and it's not attached, get that sorted and the piece will be stunning.

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      • Jiří Kůs
        Jiří Kůs @kai satoshi last edited by

        @Kris-Knight is the gerbil standing in the sphere? I thought he will be running 🙂

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        • kai satoshi
          kai satoshi @Ace Connell last edited by

          @Ace-Connell I will give the pig a redraw and post when done 🙂 . thanks for the comments.

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          • kai satoshi
            kai satoshi @Jiří Kůs last edited by

            @Jiří-Kůs haha... yeah, running would be fun. I think I'm gonna stick with him standing that way he can look excited like he is just enjoying the view.... but running would be a good way to go also. 🙂

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            • kai satoshi
              kai satoshi last edited by

              Here is a new version of the PIG. Let me know guys 🙂

              Santas Deer are sick 5.jpg

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              • Dulcie
                Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

                That pig is looads better! Love his expression 🙂

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                • kai satoshi
                  kai satoshi @Dulcie last edited by

                  @Dulcie Thanks 🙂 Glad you like.. It was definitely a good change.

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                  • Jiří Kůs
                    Jiří Kůs @kai satoshi last edited by

                    @Kris-Knight with this pose of the pig, there should be some tension in the rope, this way it looks unnatural. it seems like it is floating ignoring the weight of the pig, like in vaccuum. Yet they should drag the sledge.

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                    • mattramsey
                      mattramsey last edited by

                      great improvement on the pig!

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                      • Sarah LuAnn
                        Sarah LuAnn SVS OG last edited by

                        Haha, that pig is great! It looks like you're having a lot of fun with this.

                        Feel free to ignore this, but as someone who grew up with driving ponies it seems so weird to me that they would somehow be able to pull a sleigh without some kind of actual harness, particularly the cow and pig. Others might not fixate on that as much as me though, its just my background I guess that makes me look for that specifically.

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                        • kai satoshi
                          kai satoshi @Sarah LuAnn last edited by

                          @Sarah-LuAnn
                          Yeah, I definitely was going for the more whimsical beginning of the animal's journey. They are all freaking out (not the gerbil) and aren't working together yet. I know what you are saying about the harness :). I totally agree. I just went with the whole magic of it and less with the actual physics that would be necessary :). I appreciate the comment! Thanks.

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                          • mattramsey
                            mattramsey @kai satoshi last edited by

                            @Kris-Knight

                            Ha ha those eggs. Priceless.

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                            • kai satoshi
                              kai satoshi @mattramsey last edited by

                              @mattramsey
                              Thanks matt.
                              I was checking out your art heroes... I love all those guys too. Adam Rex's poetry is cool. and Sam Neilson is just awesome. not to mention Bobby and the others. lol

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                                • kai satoshi
                                  kai satoshi @Guest last edited by

                                  @Damien-Rambacher
                                  Thanks! Yeah, I will revisit the batteries as I paint it... I'm like you... I'd rather not have the word but I was playing it safe. lol.

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                                  • Chip Valecek
                                    Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @kai satoshi last edited by

                                    @Kris-Knight you could always do something like AAA or 9V instead of batteries.


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                                    • kai satoshi
                                      kai satoshi @Chip Valecek last edited by

                                      @Chip-Valecek
                                      Very true... I will try that and take a look 🙂

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                                      • kai satoshi
                                        kai satoshi last edited by

                                        Update WIP

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                                        • kai satoshi
                                          kai satoshi last edited by

                                          Update WIP

                                          Santa Deer 2.jpg

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                                          • kai satoshi
                                            kai satoshi last edited by

                                            And here is where I am at right now...
                                            Let me know your thoughts to improve... Thanks guys :).

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