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    My first Children's Book - Bed Head

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    • pagurcia
      pagurcia @Kayla Groening last edited by

      Thanks @kadelex Holly Becker, the writer, had the fun idea and bringing it to life was a ton of fun!

      Portfolio: http://www.pabloagurcia.com/
      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/pagurcia/
      Children's book: thebedheadbook.com

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        pagurcia @Perrij last edited by

        @Perrij We will celebrate BIG once the KS wraps. Its been such a fun ride im almost sad its over (just means i have to find a new project to jump on ASAP!)

        Portfolio: http://www.pabloagurcia.com/
        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/pagurcia/
        Children's book: thebedheadbook.com

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          pagurcia @Sofie Schollaert last edited by

          @Sofie-Schollaert Yep, incredibly humbling seeing such awesome art and deep knowledge here but making a concerted effort to throw my work in the ring and hope for improvement and growth and get over the "fear". You should post up your work, so far you all have been incredibly encouraging! πŸ™‚

          Portfolio: http://www.pabloagurcia.com/
          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/pagurcia/
          Children's book: thebedheadbook.com

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          • cam.royce
            cam.royce last edited by

            Such a fun idea for a children's book, and I feel like you did such a great job of depicting the hair. I love the contrast of the warm hair color to the cool background. Everything pops real nicely πŸ™‚ Something about the first page feels different to me than the other pages- too me it doesn't pop quite as much as the other images, and I think it may be that there's a little too much black used to create shadows?? To me it feels like using more blues and purples would give your page some great color while still helping the reader see that the boy is entering a dark room. Just an idea πŸ™‚ And you did such a great job of the images on page 18 and 19 I like the energy you created by giving us various close ups of his hair running a-muck! Great job, and best wishes!

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            • pagurcia
              pagurcia @cam.royce last edited by

              @cam-royce that is a GREAT point. That spread has all the legal jargon and junk on the left half so thats the reason for the large dark space. Ill try adjusting the shadows to match the purples and colors of the β€œdark” on the rest of the pages. THANKS!

              Portfolio: http://www.pabloagurcia.com/
              Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/pagurcia/
              Children's book: thebedheadbook.com

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              • Chip Valecek
                Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @pagurcia last edited by

                @pagurcia that would make for a great movie. Sorta like Inside Out. Congrats on the book! To finish a project like that is a huge accomplishment.


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                • Elizabeth Rose
                  Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                  Way to go! Love your style πŸ™‚

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                  https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
                  https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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                  • ElBench
                    ElBench last edited by

                    Well done! Excellent stuff

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                    • pagurcia
                      pagurcia last edited by

                      Hey everyone! Just jumping on to let you all know the kickstarter was funded last night! Im losing it! So pumped to have something of my own to point at call β€œdone”!!!

                      Portfolio: http://www.pabloagurcia.com/
                      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/pagurcia/
                      Children's book: thebedheadbook.com

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                      • Heather Boyd
                        Heather Boyd @pagurcia last edited by

                        @pagurcia

                        Nicely done! Congratulations πŸ™‚

                        Instagram: www.instagram.com/heatherboyd.illustration/
                        Website: https://heatherboydillustration.ca
                        Shop: https://www.inprnt.com/search/products?q=HeatherBoydIllustration
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                        Be blessed,

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