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    "Dress up" WIP - critiques please

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      Amanda Jean last edited by

      Haha, we can all relate! It's a good choice so far, can't wait to see what you do with the rest!

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      • Neha Rawat
        Neha Rawat @JennyJones last edited by

        @JennyJones Haha! Thank you! (I was not familiar with the reference so I googled it :D)

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        • Neha Rawat
          Neha Rawat @BichonBistro last edited by

          @BichonBistro Thank you so much! This dog is too cute! And love the pun too! 😃

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          • Neha Rawat
            Neha Rawat @braden H last edited by

            @Braden-Hallett @TwiggyT @Amanda-Jean Thank you! 🙂

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            • ElBench
              ElBench last edited by

              Love the expression on the wolf, great idea!

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              • Neha Rawat
                Neha Rawat last edited by

                That’s for all the wonderful feedback everyone!

                Here’s the coloured version of the illustration. I’ve size of the wolf a little more from my initial sketch so that’s it stood out more. It also took me a while to figure out the colours and values.

                Critiques are welcomed!

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                  Amanda Jean last edited by

                  Looks great! Love the textures ❤

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                  • MichaelaH
                    MichaelaH last edited by

                    Ha ha ha it is so great, love the expression

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                    • drawnbyshawn
                      drawnbyshawn @Neha Rawat last edited by

                      @Neha-Rawat I think it's really good! The only minor tweak I would maybe suggest is pushing the "tired" look of the wolf. Maybe an extra line under the eyes, or even darkening under the eyes??? Just to really sell the "tired" expression and not "sad". Not sure ... it may not be needed, but just an idea.

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                      • Neha Rawat
                        Neha Rawat @drawnbyshawn last edited by

                        @drawnbyshawn thanks shawn! Yes that makes sense since the under eye wrinkle seems to be camouflaging with the fur Colors. Maybe I can add a little redness to the tired eyes! I'll check it out. Thank you! 🙂

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                        • peteolczyk
                          peteolczyk @Neha Rawat last edited by

                          @Neha-Rawat love it 😂

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                          • peteolczyk
                            peteolczyk last edited by

                            Can anyone tell me, where SCBWI announce their drawthis prompts?

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                              Coreyartus Moderator @peteolczyk last edited by

                              @peteolczyk I struggled to find this info, too, and finally realized that their monthly email newsletter update "Insight" has the prompt in it. So that's where I'm going to start looking for it. I think you have to be a member to get it.

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                                Amanda Jean @Coreyartus last edited by

                                @Coreyartus I'm a member, and I can't find it either. The last one I found is for May 😕

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                                • braden H
                                  braden H last edited by

                                  @peteolczyk @Coreyartus @Amanda-Jean The prompt word is send out in the newsletter, but the submission process remains exactly the same (same submission address, same requirements as all the other prompts).

                                  So follow the submission steps for may, but put 'dress up draw this' in the subject line 🙂

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                                  • Neha Rawat
                                    Neha Rawat last edited by

                                    @peteolczyk @Coreyartus @Amanda-Jean Yes I also became a member only last week and couldn’t find the prompt for August but I found it from another SVS forum post.
                                    SCBWI hasn’t updated the prompt on their website and neither have they uploaded the current months insight. So it was really by chance that I found out topic. The insight newsletter is emailed to all the members on the first of the month.

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                                    • peteolczyk
                                      peteolczyk @braden H last edited by

                                      @Braden-Hallett thanks for the tip, I’ve found the link now in the newsletter. I’ll keep an eye out in future. 👍

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