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    "Dress up" WIP - critiques please

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    • MichaelaH
      MichaelaH last edited by

      Ha ha ha it is so great, love the expression

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      • drawnbyshawn
        drawnbyshawn @Neha Rawat last edited by

        @Neha-Rawat I think it's really good! The only minor tweak I would maybe suggest is pushing the "tired" look of the wolf. Maybe an extra line under the eyes, or even darkening under the eyes??? Just to really sell the "tired" expression and not "sad". Not sure ... it may not be needed, but just an idea.

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        • Neha Rawat
          Neha Rawat @drawnbyshawn last edited by

          @drawnbyshawn thanks shawn! Yes that makes sense since the under eye wrinkle seems to be camouflaging with the fur Colors. Maybe I can add a little redness to the tired eyes! I'll check it out. Thank you! 🙂

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          • peteolczyk
            peteolczyk @Neha Rawat last edited by

            @Neha-Rawat love it 😂

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            • peteolczyk
              peteolczyk last edited by

              Can anyone tell me, where SCBWI announce their drawthis prompts?

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              • Coreyartus
                Coreyartus Moderator @peteolczyk last edited by

                @peteolczyk I struggled to find this info, too, and finally realized that their monthly email newsletter update "Insight" has the prompt in it. So that's where I'm going to start looking for it. I think you have to be a member to get it.

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                  Amanda Jean @Coreyartus last edited by

                  @Coreyartus I'm a member, and I can't find it either. The last one I found is for May 😕

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                  • braden H
                    braden H last edited by

                    @peteolczyk @Coreyartus @Amanda-Jean The prompt word is send out in the newsletter, but the submission process remains exactly the same (same submission address, same requirements as all the other prompts).

                    So follow the submission steps for may, but put 'dress up draw this' in the subject line 🙂

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                    • Neha Rawat
                      Neha Rawat last edited by

                      @peteolczyk @Coreyartus @Amanda-Jean Yes I also became a member only last week and couldn’t find the prompt for August but I found it from another SVS forum post.
                      SCBWI hasn’t updated the prompt on their website and neither have they uploaded the current months insight. So it was really by chance that I found out topic. The insight newsletter is emailed to all the members on the first of the month.

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                      • peteolczyk
                        peteolczyk @braden H last edited by

                        @Braden-Hallett thanks for the tip, I’ve found the link now in the newsletter. I’ll keep an eye out in future. 👍

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