October prompt sketch, feedback welcome
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This one is much stronger in my opinion...good job on the leg too. Much more clearly a dog’s foot. I like that the little girl isn’t the one starting the car too...even though it made for a fun composition I did wonder why she was driving. For what it’s worth, the far electrode in the ground may be a little too far off in the distance to be clear about what’s happening...now that the frogs are gone and they’re a little smaller it kind of disappears back there. Not sure if that’s an easy fix or not but it may help drive the point home.
No pun intended.
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@Aaron_T I also thought the electrode thing was too small and was getting lost but for the moment, I’m leaving it as it.
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Which one should I post to the contest?
Finished not perfict!
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Love the addition of the worm! I think the black and white one is stronger...I get that you want to highlight the paw in the foreground but feel like the ink wash doesn’t help draw attention to the foreground as much as it hides some of your great details.
