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    Hello! Would love a critique on this art!

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    • KaraDaniel
      KaraDaniel @SFischer last edited by

      @SFischer Well then I think you nailed his expression nicely. Looking forward to seeing the final piece 🙂

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      • Fossi Images
        Fossi Images last edited by

        Great image! Love the perspective!

        Would love to see the more bananas version, and some cast shadows to ground them (along with the other aforementioned adjustments to them)

        Also, maybe differentiate some of the texturing. I kind of feel like the noise that is permeating the image is overwhelming as it is affecting every surface.

        https://instagram.com/fossi_images

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