17 Nov 2019, 23:59
I made this comp sketch for slowvember. Do any of you guys have any critiques mainly composition wise, be as picky and specific as you can. That would help a lot. Thanks!
Slowvember
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I made this comp sketch for slowvember. Do any of you guys have any critiques mainly composition wise, be as picky and specific as you can. That would help a lot. Thanks! -
the wire going across the piece keeps pulling my eye back to it. It is pulling focus from your focal point.
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@Chip-Valecek Thank you! I appreciate it, I’ll go head and do that
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Looks like its going to be a really interesting piece. Looking forward to seeing what becomes of your sketch.
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@Chip-Valecek Is there anything else you would change? Thanks!
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@KaraDaniel Thanks! Means a lot!
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@phoenix-yip as of right now that is all that stands out. Once you start to define your shapes and add details, it will all start to come together and then you can look and tweak as you move along.
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@Chip-Valecek great, thank you
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Really nice feeling of space! I agree that the wire is distracting and maybe it would feel even more spacious if the contrast in value was higher. Overall nice composition.
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@Kevin-Terry Thanks a lot!