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      IanS @ArtofJoseGalue last edited by

      @josegalue25 My next tattoo may read "Composition first detail later!"

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        IanS last edited by

        I've kept the sketch much looser this time as adding lots of detail at this stage is proving to be a really effective way of wasting time! I was really inspired by @Kevin-Longueil's draw over and tweaked it a little. Also replaced the lizard with another postal helper (Starting to look more and more like Santa which is fitting considering the time of year) and instead of letters spilling out the bag the elf is releasing them magic style! Am I getting there?

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          IanS last edited by

          Latest comp. I moved everything down as I didn't like how close the wizard was to the top frame. I've also added a quick value layer to separate foreground, midground and background. Any feedback welcome. I'll be starting the final artwork soon I think. As Mr Parker says "Finished not perfect!"

          Wizard.jpg

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            demotlj SVS OG last edited by

            I've been away from the forum for awhile and just read through this thread. What an incredible development from your original sketch. I thought the original was good but by the time I scrolled through and got to your latest, I was really impressed. Can't wait to see it finished.

            Laurie DeMott
            instagram.com/demotlj

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              IanS @demotlj last edited by

              @demotlj: Thank you! I've had a lot of great feedback along the way.

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                Laurel Aylesworth @IanS last edited by

                @IanS This is amazing. Can I ask how you got those perspective lines in the drawing? Are you in Photoshop?

                www.laurelaylesworth.com
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                  IanS @Laurel Aylesworth last edited by

                  @Laurel-Aylesworth: Hi Laurel. Thank you very much! I'm using Clip Studio paint which has perspective rules. 1, 2 and 3 point perspective.

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                    KaraDaniel @IanS last edited by

                    @IanS looking good! Excited to see it in color!

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                    karadaniel.net

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                      IanS @KaraDaniel last edited by

                      Thanks @KaraDaniel!

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                        IanS last edited by

                        Progress is going slowly but I'm getting there. I'm definitely spending too long on this!

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