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    December prompt WIP: pigeons

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    • NicolaSchofield
      NicolaSchofield last edited by

      I found myself putting off working on this several times over the past week & finally had to admit that I just wasnโ€™t feeling this scene at all. I went back and sketched something simpler that focuses more on her expression. Going to try and paint some nice light and texture and see where it goes.
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      Nicola Schofield

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      • Laurel Aylesworth
        Laurel Aylesworth @NicolaSchofield last edited by

        @neschof I like #11. There is something so perfect about your thumbnails. I like how simple and understated they are, but they still convey your message. I'd keep going back to those.

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        • NicolaSchofield
          NicolaSchofield @Laurel Aylesworth last edited by

          @Laurel-Aylesworth thank you. I think youโ€™re right, Iโ€™m just not really feeling this!
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          Nicola Schofield

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          • NicolaSchofield
            NicolaSchofield last edited by

            Ok, I think Iโ€™m calling this pretty much done now. Time to move on to other things.
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            Nicola Schofield

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            • Heather Boyd
              Heather Boyd @NicolaSchofield last edited by

              @neschof

              Oh I like this one. I agree I think in this you were able to work things out in your favour. ๐Ÿ™‚

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              • braden H
                braden H @NicolaSchofield last edited by

                @neschof I really like how this turned out! I might try one small adjustment before submitting ๐Ÿ™‚ Our friends the pigeons are kinda fading into the background (the ones on her head, I assume the one's in the bushes are meant to fade into the background) A little bit more of a highlight might help to pop them out into the foreground.

                Really, though, this is adorable ๐Ÿ™‚

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                • deborah Haagenson
                  deborah Haagenson last edited by

                  This makes me smile when I look at it. It's cute!!

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                  • NicolaSchofield
                    NicolaSchofield @braden H last edited by

                    @Braden-Hallett thank you, yes I vaguely thought that but was being too lazy to change it ๐Ÿ˜

                    Iโ€™ve now added more of a dark area to the background around her head, added a bit of rim light (hey hey, painting colour and light 2.0 in action!) to the pigeons, and also darkened her mouth as I think it was getting a bit a lost.

                    Going to sleep on it and hopefully submit tomorrow.

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                    Nicola Schofield

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                    • braden H
                      braden H @NicolaSchofield last edited by

                      @neschof That reads MUCH better now ๐Ÿ™‚ Bravo!

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                      • Coley
                        Coley @NicolaSchofield last edited by

                        @neschof this is the cutest. Not the best critique LoL, but it really is sweet ๐Ÿ™‚

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