December prompt wip - feedback welcome!

[eriberart]

Hi guys, I have reworked the image, redoing in the lineart in places and redoing the colouring. I didn't like how stiff and rendered the first image was as I like to try and keep my lineart really loose. I also thought the brush texture was a bit too much at points. I pushed the values a bit more and moved the text in the new image. Not sure which version I like more... Probably somewhere in between the two would be ideal haha!