SCBWI Snow Day WIP - Critiques Welcome

Heather Boyd

I like it -it's warmer and cosier . I haven't been on much so I apologise if this was already in your work but I like seeing the depth of the window intersecting vertical and horizontal panels (holds the glass) ahh you understand I hope - gives a nice depth.
I just thought of an addition of the dragon's tongue coming up and over to take some hot chocolate but leave that for another time, I like this one as it is.

theprairiefox

@Heather-Boyd the tongue would have been fun! Oh well, next time...

I understand the intersecting of the windows. I also needed to pay attention to the snow not filling the whole depth as it would only be on the outside of the pane of glass. I hope that made sense as well...