3rd Thursday Naughty Children FINAL

[bharris]

I'm re-working the composition to give it better emphasis and overlapping. This one feels too flat when I looked at it this morning.

[MOO]

Great idea and love the preliminary sketch idea!

[Naroth Kean]

haha, you know what I like the idea. Naughty or bullies need to get to work XD. I like the composition and each of their interaction with the story.

[smoke]

concept is already great! cant wait to see the finished piece!!

[bharris]

Here is a different concept, doesn't feel as flat to me, but my husband liked the first better. What do you guys think?

[Chip Valecek]

I prefer the second one. Looks like the children are more staggered. Some in the foreground, some in the mid and some in back. Hence not the flat of all in a line. Is the one child in back of Santa sticking is tongue out? If so I like it.

[Lee White]

Second one for sure! Really nice!

[Thrace]

@bharris The second one definitely!! What a wonderful image, I can't wait to see it finished!!

[bharris]

Thanks everyone!

[Naroth Kean]

like the second one for the obvious reason :D. Good job!

[bharris]

Still behind, but the line work is done!

[Thrace]

@bharris So nice!! Get painting!!

[Chip Valecek]

Looks great! Can't wait to see it painted.

[Dulcie]

@bharris Oh, this is so beautifully drawn and I'm sure it is going to be amazing!! Great work! I am really looking forward to seeing the coloured version now.

The one thing I think...maybe it's too late to change....but I would just love to see some of those kids with little reindeer antler headbands! It would be so cute and IMO would help the storytelling part, that the kids are meant to be reindeer (and not just kids messing around in the snow).

[shinjifujioka]

Very lively image!

[kai satoshi]

Very nice line work. Mine is never this clean.

[Joy Heyer]

The details in the line work is beautiful! I can't to wait to see color added!

[bharris]

@Dulcie Thank you so much! I love that idea and I can see a few of the kids that would be excellent targets for antlers, also it'll add another holiday detail.

@Kris-Knight I'm a little OC with the lines... I tried so hard not to zoom in to clean them up perfectly, it can be a time waster!

@Joy-Heyer @shinjifujioka @Chip-Valecek @Thrace-Shirley-Mears Thank you so much everyone! I''ll post updates soon!

[Rob Smith]

@bharris Such great work. I really like the latest updates. Your line work is so great!

[MOO]

The second one is more interesting and active. But they both look really great , IMHO. Really nice work.