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    3rd Thursday Naughty Children FINAL

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    • MOO
      MOO SVS OG last edited by

      Great idea and love the preliminary sketch idea!

      Marsha Ottum Owen

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      • Naroth Kean
        Naroth Kean last edited by

        haha, you know what I like the idea. Naughty or bullies need to get to work XD. I like the composition and each of their interaction with the story.

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        • smoke
          smoke last edited by

          concept is already great! 🙂 cant wait to see the finished piece!! 🙂

          smoke

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          • bharris
            bharris last edited by

            Here is a different concept, doesn't feel as flat to me, but my husband liked the first better. What do you guys think?

            naughty children sketch 2.PNG

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            • Chip Valecek
              Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

              I prefer the second one. Looks like the children are more staggered. Some in the foreground, some in the mid and some in back. Hence not the flat of all in a line. Is the one child in back of Santa sticking is tongue out? If so I like it.


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              • Lee White
                Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

                Second one for sure! Really nice!

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                • Thrace
                  Thrace @bharris last edited by

                  @bharris The second one definitely!! What a wonderful image, I can't wait to see it finished!!

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                  • bharris
                    bharris last edited by

                    Thanks everyone!

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                    • Naroth Kean
                      Naroth Kean last edited by

                      like the second one for the obvious reason :D. Good job!

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                      • bharris
                        bharris last edited by

                        Still behind, but the line work is done! 🙂

                        naughty children sketch 2.PNG

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                        • Thrace
                          Thrace @bharris last edited by

                          @bharris So nice!! Get painting!!

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                          • Chip Valecek
                            Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

                            Looks great! Can't wait to see it painted.


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                            • Dulcie
                              Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

                              @bharris Oh, this is so beautifully drawn and I'm sure it is going to be amazing!! Great work! 🙂 I am really looking forward to seeing the coloured version now.

                              The one thing I think...maybe it's too late to change....but I would just love to see some of those kids with little reindeer antler headbands! It would be so cute and IMO would help the storytelling part, that the kids are meant to be reindeer (and not just kids messing around in the snow).

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                              • shinjifujioka
                                shinjifujioka SVS OG last edited by

                                Very lively image!

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                                • kai satoshi
                                  kai satoshi last edited by

                                  Very nice line work. Mine is never this clean.

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                                  • Joy Heyer
                                    Joy Heyer last edited by

                                    The details in the line work is beautiful! I can't to wait to see color added!

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                                    • bharris
                                      bharris last edited by

                                      @Dulcie Thank you so much! I love that idea and I can see a few of the kids that would be excellent targets for antlers, also it'll add another holiday detail. 🙂

                                      @Kris-Knight I'm a little OC with the lines... I tried so hard not to zoom in to clean them up perfectly, it can be a time waster!

                                      @Joy-Heyer @shinjifujioka @Chip-Valecek @Thrace-Shirley-Mears Thank you so much everyone! I''ll post updates soon!

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                                      • Rob Smith
                                        Rob Smith last edited by

                                        @bharris Such great work. I really like the latest updates. Your line work is so great!

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                                        • MOO
                                          MOO SVS OG last edited by

                                          The second one is more interesting and active. But they both look really great , IMHO. Really nice work.

                                          Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                          • bharris
                                            bharris last edited by

                                            Hey all, finished the tone and it was my first time working like this. I feel pretty good about it, but is there anything that is obviously wrong or that may need more lightening or darkening? Thanks for the feed back!

                                            naughty children sketch 4.JPG

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