Feedback Request WIP Haunted Library

[TessaW]

Thank you everyone! You gave such good feedback, it's been very helpful. I've decided to make this into a chapter title page. I'll be working on the final sketch a little later, once I figure out the layouts and general comps of the other pieces. I'll be keeping your notes on hand for when I get back to it.

If anyone wants to throw out some thoughts on the text layout, I'm all ears.

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@TessaW lovely!

[KaraDaniel]

@TessaW cool idea! I do find the border distracting from your artwork. But I like your word placement, especially "the" trapped in the web.