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    January Prompt WIP (Critiques Requested)

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    • Kali
      Kali @xin li last edited by

      @xin-li Thank you Xin, I appreciate your recommendation 🙂 I’ll give this a watch tonight before I work on the thumbnails. I’ve always had trouble with them, especially with making them small enough!

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      • Kali
        Kali last edited by

        I think that I am just about done here... scared to call it finished until the end of January lol! Definitely not perfect but possibly one of my best lighting pieces so far (in my opinion, anyway) 53ED036A-D123-40AA-B721-EA3EFFA174F1.jpeg

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        • aska
          aska @Kali last edited by

          @Kalimostlypaints super cool! In fact i have a similar idea... and now nobody will believe me;-) There is a mountain in Slovenia that looks like a giant and I wanted to use it in my illustration. I won't give up this idea but now i have a harder task having such great competition! Anyway well done 🙂

          Aska
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          • Kali
            Kali @aska last edited by

            @aska Thank you! 🙂 I think a few others had the same idea as well, great minds think alike!

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            • KaraDaniel
              KaraDaniel last edited by

              Wonderful! My only thought on anything to change would be to have different values on the trees...closer to the viewer darker...would add a bit of contrast to the overall piece and get more of a sense of depth. I really love how you handled this challenge, great job!

              instagram.com/sha_kara
              karadaniel.net

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              • Meg Clayburn
                Meg Clayburn @Kali last edited by

                @Kalimostlypaints it looks really good, my suggestion is to look at the balance of the little boy. I think the leg closest to is should be closer to the footprint than the one further away from the footprint... The feet look like you could draw a horizontal line right under them wish makes the back one look longer. It's a super cute idea and the composition is great!

                Meg Clayburn

                Instagram.com/meg_clayburn

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                • Nathalie Kranich
                  Nathalie Kranich last edited by

                  the snow looks amazing, well rendered!

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