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    January WIP - SnowyMountain Owl - Process/Feedback

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    • carlianne
      carlianne @Braxton last edited by

      @Braxton cute I love it!!! ❤️

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        Jenna Jenks @Braxton last edited by

        @Braxton this is really adorable!

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        • NicolaSchofield
          NicolaSchofield @carlianne last edited by

          @carlianne said in January WIP - SnowyMountain Owl - Process/Feedback:

          @neschof thanks so much for the feedback! I was actually thinking it would be fun if you realize after a second read or so that those mountains are actually all owls, maybe I need to make them look more owly? Or maybe that idea isn't working?

          Ah ha! No, if they're all supposed to be owls then they're perfect 👍
          I think it was just because on the previous image they were not all owls and I thought this image was the same idea

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          • carlianne
            carlianne @NicolaSchofield last edited by

            @neschof yes sorry I ended up changing my mind about it! Glad that it is working! 🙂 I was struggling with what story I wanted to tell in this one for awhile so it's been a little all over the place.

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            • carlianne
              carlianne last edited by

              Still rough, need to paint the trees, not sure how much time I'll have to tighten things down.

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              @Braxton I ran with your idea a little bit!

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              • aska
                aska @carlianne last edited by

                @carlianne Nice! 🙂 I have one though on the mountains tho. The faraway mountain keeps catching my eyes. Maybe she should be sleeping as well? Just a thought 😉

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                • carlianne
                  carlianne @aska last edited by

                  @aska okay I'll try it!

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                  • Braxton
                    Braxton @carlianne last edited by

                    @carlianne really cute!

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                    • carlianne
                      carlianne last edited by

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                      Was feeling like it needed more color variation in the foreground and background, and so the owls looked a little different than the snow.

                      @aska I made the other mountain sleep. Let me know if it is better!

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                      • aska
                        aska @carlianne last edited by

                        @carlianne defenietly! I would probably also add some atmospheric perspective to the mountains, make them more blurry if you know what I mean. Cool picture tho:)

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