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    • Phil Cullen
      Phil Cullen @chrisaakins last edited by

      @chrisaakins It's a nice trick to add depth. Further away stuff gets the less contrast there is, so I find digitally it's very handy to knock stuff back into the distance and add depth with layers of low opacity colour, also helps unify the elements in the background.

      www.instagram.com/phillip.cullen/
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      • Daniel Grissom
        Daniel Grissom last edited by

        I thought I should post the end result. I was selected as one of the finalists for this local competition, won a cash prize, and got my art put up in the city. (It got complicated when they sent me the final template, but I learned some important lessons along the way.) Thanks very much to all of you for your input!

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        ? Kevin Longueil K.Flagg Nyrryl  Cadiz Johanna Kim 6 Replies Last reply Reply Quote 6
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          A Former User @Daniel Grissom last edited by A Former User

          @Daniel-Grissom wow! Thanks for showing us such an interesting application of your work, and fantastic job! Congrats on the win.

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          • Kevin Longueil
            Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Daniel Grissom last edited by

            @Daniel-Grissom That is very cool!!!

            Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
            https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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            • Coreyartus
              Coreyartus Moderator last edited by

              Wow. Just WOW. Very very cool!!! I love how it's a wrap-around repeat. So much fun happening here!! Well done!!!

              Children's Illustration Portfolio: https://www.coreyartusillustration.com
              Art Portfolio: https://www.coreyartusimagery.com
              Mastodon: https://mindly.social/@Coreyartus
              Pixelfed: https://pixelfed.social/Coreyartus

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              • K.Flagg
                K.Flagg @Daniel Grissom last edited by

                @Daniel-Grissom well done! It looks great šŸ˜€

                K.Flagg

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                • Neha Rawat
                  Neha Rawat last edited by

                  @Daniel-Grissom This looks super! Congratulations! The template does look very tricky but you did a great job! 😃

                  https://www.nrbstudio.in/
                  https://www.instagram.com/nrbstudio.in

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                  • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                    Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Daniel Grissom last edited by

                    @Daniel-Grissom congratulations! Which city is this?

                    Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                    YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                    • Daniel Grissom
                      Daniel Grissom last edited by

                      Thanks a lot, folks. @Nyrryl-Cadiz this is Chattanooga, Tennessee.

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                      • Johanna Kim
                        Johanna Kim SVS OG @Daniel Grissom last edited by

                        @Daniel-Grissom This turned out so awesome! I love all the different animal characters, the relaxed community vibe, and the palette you chose. The button on the raccoon's nose is a really funny touch. Well done!

                        http://www.johannakim.com
                        http://instagram.com/johannahkim/

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                        • Jeremy Ross
                          Jeremy Ross @Daniel Grissom last edited by

                          Congratulations @Daniel-Grissom! It came out beautiful! I’m sure it will bring many smiles to the community, especially for you!

                          https://www.instagram.com/jeremyrayross
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                          https://jeremyrayross.substack.com/

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