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    • Suji Park
      Suji Park last edited by Suji Park

      Hey all 😊
      I've been drawing a series of images with a panda and red panda together these days.
      This is a scene of them together on a snowy night. Still work in progress.
      I can't decide if the composition is better with or without the crop! What's your vote?

      1. with crop
        20200121_171125.jpg

      2. without crop
        resizedpanda.jpg

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        IanS last edited by

        I like 2 without crop better. Nice work!

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        • aska
          aska @Suji Park last edited by

          @Suji-Park 2:-)

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          • eriberart
            eriberart last edited by

            Really cute! I also like it better without the crop 🙂

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            • Jenna Jenks
              Jenna Jenks @Suji Park last edited by

              @Suji-Park I think they both are a very nice perspective depending on what you are saying with the image. If you are expressing an intimate moment in conversation, the cropped close up feels appropriate, but if you are giving a sense of closure (like an ending scene where you are leaving off with a sense of contentment and friendship, the panned out imagine is more fitting (in my opinion of course) ❤️ Either way, both perspectives are quite lovely

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              • Suji Park
                Suji Park last edited by

                @IanS @aska @eriberart Thanks so much for voting!❤ Sounds like 2 is the popular choice! :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_smiling_eyes:

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                • Suji Park
                  Suji Park @eriberart last edited by

                  @eriberart @Jenna-Jenks Jenna, I love your descriptions. The way you described the images make both options sound good to me! I am leaning toward the image without the crop though. Like you said, I like the sense of closure. Thanks for your thoughtful comment ♥

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                  • Laurasketches
                    Laurasketches last edited by

                    Liking it better without the crop--mainly because the design of the window is lovely AND the characters of the two watching birds adds visual interest. I also think it helps the color scheme pop out the yellow framing your main characters. Nice work!

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                    • Jenna Jenks
                      Jenna Jenks @Suji Park last edited by

                      @Suji-Park you're most welcome! I'm glad I could give you food for thought 😘

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