WIP- Nightfall (Previously: Is the perspective convincing enough?)

[Jeremy Ross]

@TessaW looks great!

[demotlj]

I like it with the tea set. For me, the empty space draws my eye away from the girl. Overall, it's a beautiful drawing.

[Laurel Aylesworth]

I agree with @demotlj - the tea set is beautiful but it takes my eye away from the girl.

[KaraDaniel]

Wow! looks great! I would choose no tea set unless it is pertinent to the story to be in the image. I love the pattern on the blanket and how the light hits her face and the interesting way you've sketched in the background using a white line. Can't wait to see more.

[TessaW]

Thanks for the feedback everyone! It's helping with motivation. I've always been more of a painter than a draw-er and the drawing part has been difficult!

Right now I'm trying to decide between showing more of the ghostly atmosphere with just a tad bit of decay (tree and floorboards around it). Or pushing more of the ghostly element by making things feel more transparent and show even more decay. Not sure which to choose. These are kinda rough and not completely worked out, but hopefully you can sort of see what I'm going for. Thoughts?