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    Eragon Mini-Comic - Finished!

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    • Jake Parker
      Jake Parker SVS OG last edited by

      Hey, this is super cool. I like what you did with the elf passing in front of the word bubble. Great storytelling device.

      I'm a huge fan of doing short comics, glad you're trying it out!

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      • MirkaH
        MirkaH last edited by

        this is adorable. wonderful job!

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          badwiser last edited by

          I love the fight sequence and I like making short comics too!

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          • Hendrych Kuch
            Hendrych Kuch @carriecopadraws last edited by Hendrych Kuch

            @carriecopadraws said in Eragon Mini-Comic - Finished!:

            To learn how to make a comics, I decided to...make a short comic! Since the timing of the completion of it lines up with @Jake-Parker 's recent advice on creating smaller projects, then collecting them into a book or something later, I thought I'd share it here.

            I adapted a scene from the Inheritance cycle (Eldest by Chistopher Paolini) into a 14-page comic. Translating a book from just words to visuals and dialogue was a fun challenge. A lot of SVS skills helped me with the scripting, page flow, thumbnails, character design, environment design, inking, and colors, whew! That would actually make a fun SVS class.

            Check out the first pages below, and read the whole thing on my website at https://carriecopadraws.com/comics/ !

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            The whole truth in 14 pictures. What could be more fun? I liked it.

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            • Oana
              Oana @carriecopadraws last edited by

              @carriecopadraws Love it! Really well done!!

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              • Nico Ecenarro
                Nico Ecenarro last edited by

                Great work! I love the idea of using a scene from a story. This is complete and leaves the reader satisfied, but absolutely wanting to come back to it. Solid panel layout design too.

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                • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                  Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Hendrych Kuch last edited by

                  @Hendrych-Kuch gorgeous!!!!!

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                  • chrisaakins
                    chrisaakins last edited by

                    @carriecopadraws love it! Great job. Very good story telling. You inspire me.

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                    • Elisabeth Rae
                      Elisabeth Rae @carriecopadraws last edited by

                      @carriecopadraws

                      Ooh I love this, it's very inspiring. It has a very fun and gorgeous style to look at. I like how the dialog and images flow well together!

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                      • Justin Moss
                        Justin Moss last edited by

                        Nice job! I really appreciate the sequence when the character is fully drawn, but divided by the panels.

                        Justin Moss
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