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    • deborah Haagenson
      deborah Haagenson last edited by

      I see my proportions need some work, the size of the mother's head for example. My focus this month is to try to create cute kids and nice lighting contrasted with the dark.
      feb contest line sketch.jpg
      feb contest value study.jpg

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      • KaraDaniel
        KaraDaniel @deborah Haagenson last edited by

        @deborah-Haagenson looks like a precious moment!

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        • braden H
          braden H @deborah Haagenson last edited by

          @deborah-Haagenson It's shaping up nicely! I think you're right to want to fiddle with some of the proportions 🙂

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          • deborah Haagenson
            deborah Haagenson @braden H last edited by

            @Braden-Hallett Thank you for the feedback! This was just my initial sketch. I was pretty amazed when my value study came out pretty balanced. This was the first time I've actually done this. Someone posted a set of value studies last month, which I thought were a great idea. I see my improvement each month. It helps to see the work posted by others, so I don't just sit in a vaccume wondering how what I'm doing compares.

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