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    • TessaW
      TessaW last edited by TessaW

      While leaving it without a background is an option, I'd encourage you to play with the values and colors like so:

      Aleksey.png

      Use the color balance, levels, hue and saturation in your photo editing program to play around. Look at sunset pictures for color ideas.

      Another couple of suggestions to play with:

      1. Either remove the sun, or move the moon to be at a more diagonal relationship to the sun, to help with balance and focus.
      2. Maybe add a little more of the night sky in the upper portion of the comp to help balance the scene.

      I don't know if those changes would be effective, but it's worth playing with.

      This is such a fun piece! Love it.

      Website: www.tessawrathall.com

      Instagram: www.instagram.com/tessawrathall_art/

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      • ArtofAleksey
        ArtofAleksey last edited by

        This is very helpful thank you!

        instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
        alekseyillustration.com

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        • chrisaakins
          chrisaakins last edited by

          @Aleksey I think you are missing the opportunity to let the night sky be more bird shaped in keeping your theme. Think of wings of the night kind of thing. I would think about adding some highlights on your figure to show the glint of the sun on its features and to emphasize its importance.

          Chris Akins
          www.chrisakinsart.com
          www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

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          • ArtofAleksey
            ArtofAleksey @chrisaakins last edited by

            @chrisaakins im not sure i follow with the first part, you mean the dark blob silhouette to be more birdshaped?
            Also i havnt started on the highlights but I’ll keep that in mind for when i do. Thanks chris.

            instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
            alekseyillustration.com

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            • ArtofAleksey
              ArtofAleksey last edited by

              So im gonna play around with the background colors but so far i did the local colors of the birdhero and i like the shape of the night blob.
              The sun ill have disappearing Behind the cliffs rather than water. I think taking out the water is gonna make it easier. But i also dont mind removing the sun completely.

              I like how the moon kinda looks like an eye
              8C3708E1-AD52-4079-B88D-73AECFC27969.jpeg

              instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
              alekseyillustration.com

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              • KaraDaniel
                KaraDaniel @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                @Aleksey I really love how the sky looks like a bird and yes the moon does look like an eye!

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                • ArtofAleksey
                  ArtofAleksey @KaraDaniel last edited by ArtofAleksey

                  @KaraDaniel thanks kara!

                  Ok so i think these colors are working way better ty @TessaW for that color feedback it helpedme with picking colors i like. Im struggling a tiny bit with a concept of night being created, so how would the sky look? Shouldi do a dark red at the top of that sky? Should i leave it?
                  Do you think im done with local colors at this point?
                  (I noticed that Night blob is too close to the right side Of the image i gotta fix that.
                  7ED565AE-8BF3-4881-A9EF-89682D8A32AB.jpeg

                  instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                  alekseyillustration.com

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                  • ArtofAleksey
                    ArtofAleksey last edited by

                    ok I think win or lose I'm very happy with the outcome.
                    The NIGHT BIRB
                    February Submission.JPG

                    instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                    alekseyillustration.com

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                    • ArtofAleksey
                      ArtofAleksey last edited by

                      Forgot to add the blue light
                      February Submission.jpg

                      instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                      alekseyillustration.com

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                      • StudioLooong
                        StudioLooong @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                        @Aleksey LOVE this, the colors and rendering are amazing and the concept is cool but I think that your night magic is cutting off the tip of the moon staff.

                        Taylor Woolley
                        (Formerly Taylor Ackerman / StudioLooong)


                        Website: www.woolleystories.com
                        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/woolleystories/

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                        • ArtofAleksey
                          ArtofAleksey @StudioLooong last edited by

                          @StudioLooong i tried to make it look like the moon staff is cutting the day sky to create the night sorta? i dont know i should have played with the concept more before i jumped into it haha

                          instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                          alekseyillustration.com

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