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    Spots illustrations that focus on characters for my portfolio - critique please

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    • TessaW
      TessaW last edited by

      So cute! I love this character. She's looking really good to me. I'm thinking her center of gravity is not quite right in the stance where she's leaning toward the bug, almost like she wouldn't be able to balance quite like that. It's not very noticeable though, and I wouldn't want you to lose the dynamic quality it has, but it's just a thought.

      Since her description notes that she loves picking berries, it might be nice to include some berries into the vignette of her eating at the table. (maybe that is already what you had in mind?)

      Now that you have this character, it will be a good basis to be able to contrast against when you're desgining your other characters. Can't wait to see who's next. 🙂

      Website: www.tessawrathall.com

      Instagram: www.instagram.com/tessawrathall_art/

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      • xin li
        xin li last edited by

        I met a girl with this outfit at the bus stop today. It is so Oslo in early spring. I do not know the story for this character yet, just want to capture the outfit, for now, also a good practice for turn around.
        Untitled_Artwork 13.jpg

        Web: www.lixin.no
        IG: www.instagram.com/lixin.illustration/

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        • lmrush
          lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

          Such fun and whimsical sketch lines!!!

          Lisa Rush
          www.lisarushgallery.com
          www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
          www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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          • xin li
            xin li @TessaW last edited by

            @TessaW thank you so much for the critique. I think you are spot on with her being unstable. I will try to re-draw that pose :-).

            Web: www.lixin.no
            IG: www.instagram.com/lixin.illustration/

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            • xin li
              xin li last edited by

              Finally finished my little gardener painting. Any final comments on this piece? greta-grasshopper-illustration-li-xin.jpg

              Web: www.lixin.no
              IG: www.instagram.com/lixin.illustration/

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              • xin li
                xin li last edited by

                working on the next piece: 3 spot images with the same character.
                rough sketch-emma goes to fishing.jpg

                Web: www.lixin.no
                IG: www.instagram.com/lixin.illustration/

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                • Jeremy Ross
                  Jeremy Ross @xin li last edited by

                  It’s perfect @xin-li!

                  https://www.instagram.com/jeremyrayross
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                  • Jeremy Ross
                    Jeremy Ross @xin li last edited by

                    Very cute @xin-li! Captures the imagination perfectly. Inspires me to make some spot illustrations too.

                    https://www.instagram.com/jeremyrayross
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                    https://jeremyrayross.substack.com/

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                    • Neha Rawat
                      Neha Rawat last edited by

                      @xin-li Your little gardener illustration is adorable! Loving this whole thread actually!

                      https://www.nrbstudio.in/
                      https://www.instagram.com/nrbstudio.in

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                      • xin li
                        xin li last edited by

                        I am trying out a different technique with these spot illustrations.
                        Here is a one I did with pencil on watercolor paper, and colored digitally. It is not completely done with digital coloring. But I am curoius if any of you guys have tried similar technique, so we can share tips?

                        I am looking at Christopher Denise, and Birgitta Sif's artwork recently, trying to figure out how they do digital coloring - it is a bit difficult to figure out the details since thre is no videos of their process available online. I ended up fiddling around in Photoshop.

                        fishingtrip-pencil-01.jpg
                        fishingtrip-pencil-wip.jpg

                        Web: www.lixin.no
                        IG: www.instagram.com/lixin.illustration/

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                        • TessaW
                          TessaW last edited by

                          Gorgeous work! It looks like you already have a good handle on combining the pencils work with digital colors.

                          Website: www.tessawrathall.com

                          Instagram: www.instagram.com/tessawrathall_art/

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                          • LauraA
                            LauraA SVS OG @xin li last edited by

                            @xin-li said in Spots illustrations that focus on characters for my portfolio - critique please:

                            Christopher Denise

                            I think this looks great!! I'm wondering what you're doing, because I have tried fx color overlays and I notice that they line quality just isn't the same. Plus, color overlays are rather technical and thus they are a pain to do accurately. Somehow half the time I end up with the color that I had used in the previous one.

                            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
                            http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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                            • xin li
                              xin li @LauraA last edited by

                              @LauraA I got rid of the backgorund by using Channel selection in photoshop. Then I use alpha lock on the linework layer, so I can color the line directly. So the result you see is not FX layer on top of pencil line. I wonder how others doing this, I know Christopher Denise separte his pencil work from the background in photoshop as well, but I could not completely figure out how he does the coloring.

                              Web: www.lixin.no
                              IG: www.instagram.com/lixin.illustration/

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                              • LauraA
                                LauraA SVS OG last edited by LauraA

                                @xin-li Oh, great! I'm glad there's another way to add color, because I would really like find a better one than color overlay layers. I know how to select line work with channels, but I have never heard of an alpha lock. I'm going to have to look that up! Thanks!

                                Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
                                http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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                                  JennyJones @xin li last edited by JennyJones

                                  @xin-li I think that WAY back in Christopher Denise’s instagram feed there is a process video or two. I love him too. His characters are so cute and I love his color.

                                  I’ve been experimenting too. I want my pieces to look traditional but I enjoy the convenience of digital.

                                  I love your style and have been enjoying seeing your work evolve.

                                  Edit: sorry I lied. There are no full process videos on his feed. There are several partial ones but not for color. But I know I did see one at some point. He was coloring a bear. I’ll have to look because now I NEED to see it too.

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                                  • xin li
                                    xin li @JennyJones last edited by

                                    @JennyJones thank you so much. Let me know if you find the video. I was searching information in Christopher's IG feeds as well 🙂

                                    Web: www.lixin.no
                                    IG: www.instagram.com/lixin.illustration/

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                                    • xin li
                                      xin li @LauraA last edited by

                                      @LauraA alpha lock has been super useful to me. Let me know if you have trouble finding it. I will help out :-).

                                      Web: www.lixin.no
                                      IG: www.instagram.com/lixin.illustration/

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                                      • LauraA
                                        LauraA SVS OG @xin li last edited by

                                        @xin-li I think it's transparency lock in Photoshop, right? One of the buttons next to the word "Lock at the top of the layer menu? I have tried that today, and clipping masks. The transparency look is interesting, but it seems to color lighter than the pencil under it. I will keep fiddling with it. Thank you!

                                        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
                                        http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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