Climate change - WIP - feedback appreciated

Laurel Aylesworth

Kim Hunter

#1 fits the theme best. The O would read better if it was a little bigger. Small detail - igloo building people are from the Arctic. Penguins live in the southern hemisphere in the Antarctic. A South Pole research station would fit the bill.

baileyvidler

Hm... I think 2 has the deepest concept. I've definitely never seen anything like it before. The words add a lot to the impact.

Georgios Christopoulos

@Neha-Rawat Ι love the idea of the second image. Pretty sure that if you go to that direction ,you ll make somethiing powerful.Cant wait to see what you choose!!

Neha Rawat

@TessaW Haha! Maybe I will!

@Kim-Hunter Ooh thanks for the info! I was aware that penguins live in the antarctic but I missed out on the igloos. I simple fact check from my side was overlooked. Thanks!

@baileymvidler @Georgios-Christopoulos @Laurel-Aylesworth Thanks!

TBH, I came across idea #2 on pinterest and also found it really impactful. So I decided to make it more children's booky. I do hope I'm able to to justice to these concepts in terms of the execution.
Thanks everyone for your feedback!

EliaMurrayArt

I really like #2 as well! Excited to see it come together!

Where did you find this SCBWI prompt? I am totally intrigued.

Neha Rawat

@EliaMurrayArt All SCBWI member's get a monthly magazine emailed to them at the beginning of the month which has the prompt for that month

EliaMurrayArt

@Neha-Rawat how have I been missing this!!

Neha Rawat

I went further with the 2nd idea. I don’t think the “trash” is coming through very clearly. Any suggestions on how I can improve it?

Laurel Aylesworth

@Neha-Rawat Oh, I didn't understand #2 at first, and now I get it....OOF! This is powerful. I'm glad you're going with it.