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    • sarahlash
      sarahlash last edited by

      I think this idea definitely has potential, and it’s cute, but what is the robot doing wrong? How is it malfunctioning?

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      • demotlj
        demotlj SVS OG @sarahlash last edited by

        @sarahlash That's a good question. I wasn't thinking of the robot as malfunctioning per se but was imagining that Lisa had lost control of the robot and it was acting independently. It is unleashing an army of small robots into Lisa's world over which she has no control and the small robots could become a nuisance, kind of like the brooms in the Sorcerer's Apprentice in Fantasia. Maybe that requires the viewer to fill in too many blanks, though.

        Laurie DeMott
        instagram.com/demotlj

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        • chrisaakins
          chrisaakins @demotlj last edited by

          @demotlj I saw it perfectly. I don't think it needs any explanation. No one wants their house filled with Canbots.

          Chris Akins
          www.chrisakinsart.com
          www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

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          • sarahlash
            sarahlash @demotlj last edited by

            @demotlj I think that works! Maybe just flesh out that idea by having the canbots getting into all sorts of mischief?

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            • demotlj
              demotlj SVS OG @sarahlash last edited by

              @sarahlash That's exactly what I thought after I read your post -- more mischief making by the little bots.

              Laurie DeMott
              instagram.com/demotlj

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              • demotlj
                demotlj SVS OG last edited by

                Still in the very rough stage but I added some mischief. The white and brown are just to help me figure out where I want all of the little robots.

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                Laurie DeMott
                instagram.com/demotlj

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                  aprilshin last edited by

                  Lol, what a hilarious idea! One suggestion I have is to include Lisa in the background pulling her hair out or something like that showing her distress, haha. Great job!

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                  • demotlj
                    demotlj SVS OG last edited by

                    Finished the line work and did the pencil shading. Now I have to deal with color and rendering, which is where things start to fall apart for me!

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                    Laurie DeMott
                    instagram.com/demotlj

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                      JennyJones @demotlj last edited by

                      @demotlj This is looking so fun. I can’t wait to see the final. Cute concept.

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                      • sarahlash
                        sarahlash @demotlj last edited by

                        @demotlj Love the cat!

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                        • demotlj
                          demotlj SVS OG @sarahlash last edited by

                          @sarahlash I'm happy that you were able to figure out that it is a cat. I discovered that I'm terrible at drawing cats (probably because I only own dogs.)

                          Laurie DeMott
                          instagram.com/demotlj

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                            johnchoi last edited by

                            @demotlj easily my favorite I’ve seen so far! It’s fun, lots of movement and dynamics. Love the expression(lessness) of the robot - totally just doing its thang. What if the cat is hissing instead?

                            https://www.instagram.com/johnchoi.illustrations

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                            • demotlj
                              demotlj SVS OG @johnchoi last edited by

                              @johnchoi Thanks so much. A hissing cat would have been a great idea and I wish I had thought of it earlier but I've already started the painting process and figuring out the colors may take me the rest of the month!

                              Laurie DeMott
                              instagram.com/demotlj

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                              • demotlj
                                demotlj SVS OG last edited by demotlj

                                I’ve got quite a ways to go still but while I’m working on the rest of the painting I wanted to ask which color robot you think is best. I’m leaning toward the green but I have a terrible color sense. Any opinions?

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                                Laurie DeMott
                                instagram.com/demotlj

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                                • natiwata
                                  natiwata SVS OG last edited by

                                  Hi, this is coming along nicely! I think the blue works best because it's a nicer contrast against the pinkish cabinet, floor and cat/bin colors which are all warmer. I think the green is too close and begins to clash with the yellow and red tones in the rest of the scene. Cheers!

                                  Nat Iwata
                                  www.iwataillustration.com

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                                  • demotlj
                                    demotlj SVS OG @natiwata last edited by

                                    @natiwata After I posted it and looked at them side by side, I started to lean more towards the blue too.

                                    Laurie DeMott
                                    instagram.com/demotlj

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                                    • demotlj
                                      demotlj SVS OG last edited by demotlj

                                      Here’s the blue version and more rendering. I’m almost done — just some deeper shadows and highlights, and I have to work on the cat more so it doesn’t look like a giant rat. I may just take a break and come back to it with fresh eyes in a day.

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                                      Laurie DeMott
                                      instagram.com/demotlj

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                                        Kat SVS OG last edited by

                                        Looking good! Lots of fun little things to see with the cans doing mischief.

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