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    • sarahlash
      sarahlash @demotlj last edited by

      @demotlj I think that works! Maybe just flesh out that idea by having the canbots getting into all sorts of mischief?

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      • demotlj
        demotlj SVS OG @sarahlash last edited by

        @sarahlash That's exactly what I thought after I read your post -- more mischief making by the little bots.

        Laurie DeMott
        instagram.com/demotlj

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        • demotlj
          demotlj SVS OG last edited by

          Still in the very rough stage but I added some mischief. The white and brown are just to help me figure out where I want all of the little robots.

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          Laurie DeMott
          instagram.com/demotlj

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            aprilshin last edited by

            Lol, what a hilarious idea! One suggestion I have is to include Lisa in the background pulling her hair out or something like that showing her distress, haha. Great job!

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            • demotlj
              demotlj SVS OG last edited by

              Finished the line work and did the pencil shading. Now I have to deal with color and rendering, which is where things start to fall apart for me!

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              Laurie DeMott
              instagram.com/demotlj

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                JennyJones @demotlj last edited by

                @demotlj This is looking so fun. I can’t wait to see the final. Cute concept.

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                • sarahlash
                  sarahlash @demotlj last edited by

                  @demotlj Love the cat!

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                  • demotlj
                    demotlj SVS OG @sarahlash last edited by

                    @sarahlash I'm happy that you were able to figure out that it is a cat. I discovered that I'm terrible at drawing cats (probably because I only own dogs.)

                    Laurie DeMott
                    instagram.com/demotlj

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                      johnchoi last edited by

                      @demotlj easily my favorite I’ve seen so far! It’s fun, lots of movement and dynamics. Love the expression(lessness) of the robot - totally just doing its thang. What if the cat is hissing instead?

                      https://www.instagram.com/johnchoi.illustrations

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                      • demotlj
                        demotlj SVS OG @johnchoi last edited by

                        @johnchoi Thanks so much. A hissing cat would have been a great idea and I wish I had thought of it earlier but I've already started the painting process and figuring out the colors may take me the rest of the month!

                        Laurie DeMott
                        instagram.com/demotlj

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                        • demotlj
                          demotlj SVS OG last edited by demotlj

                          I’ve got quite a ways to go still but while I’m working on the rest of the painting I wanted to ask which color robot you think is best. I’m leaning toward the green but I have a terrible color sense. Any opinions?

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                          Laurie DeMott
                          instagram.com/demotlj

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                          • natiwata
                            natiwata SVS OG last edited by

                            Hi, this is coming along nicely! I think the blue works best because it's a nicer contrast against the pinkish cabinet, floor and cat/bin colors which are all warmer. I think the green is too close and begins to clash with the yellow and red tones in the rest of the scene. Cheers!

                            Nat Iwata
                            www.iwataillustration.com

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                            • demotlj
                              demotlj SVS OG @natiwata last edited by

                              @natiwata After I posted it and looked at them side by side, I started to lean more towards the blue too.

                              Laurie DeMott
                              instagram.com/demotlj

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                              • demotlj
                                demotlj SVS OG last edited by demotlj

                                Here’s the blue version and more rendering. I’m almost done — just some deeper shadows and highlights, and I have to work on the cat more so it doesn’t look like a giant rat. I may just take a break and come back to it with fresh eyes in a day.

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                                Laurie DeMott
                                instagram.com/demotlj

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                                  Kat SVS OG last edited by

                                  Looking good! Lots of fun little things to see with the cans doing mischief.

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