Lisa Bot WIP
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This is my rough plan so far for April. If anyone wants to chime in and save me from myself go for it!
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I like the idea. But I wonder if it would be funnier if the you made it so the reader was in on the secret but the other characters were not.
For example have ‘Lisa’ posing in a very formal manner and not seeing the painting. But the reader can see that the robot is painting her with a mustache and tutu or something. And probably drop the other character.
Just a thought. Have fun. Looking forward to seeing progress.
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@theprairiefox Yes, thank you! I was feeling like it was a bit too on-the-nose. This is very helpful.
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Updated version:
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@Chris-Philpot nice... much more impact!