3 Jan 2016, 06:16

@Andy-Meeker Hello Andy - i did a quick draw over...but i did it over Noemie's by mistake 🙂 - but it is just to convey an idea so i think it still works just to show my thoughts - really it looks very good - what jumps at me though is the scale, angularity, and similarity of shape of the cacti - i think varying the shape and size might be good - the sharp angle on the cactus arms makes them look very graphic to me and almost stamp like -one other thing is that there is no focal point just yet - i take that back...there is a focal point but not made with color and light - the figures are where we should be looking but i think that the cactus closest to us commands almost as much attention because of how saturated it is.... i am not a color and light guy yet but i think it is worth thinking about - the image is very nice it just seems like you could light it a bit more to guide our eye where you want it to go...even just by lowering the saturation of the cactus or increasing that of the figures - anyways these are just my thoughts 🙂 - really nice piece!1451786140302-critique 2.jpg