Society of Visual Storytelling

    SVSLearn Forums

    • Register
    • Login
    • Search
    • Recent
    • Tags
    • Popular
    • Users
    • Groups
    • Search

    Inking Question

    SVS Class Work
    12
    15
    768
    Loading More Posts
    • Oldest to Newest
    • Newest to Oldest
    • Most Votes
    Reply
    • Reply as topic
    Log in to reply
    This topic has been deleted. Only users with topic management privileges can see it.
    • Eelwick
      Eelwick last edited by

      They look really good to me, consistent too!

      You could try a version where you use both. There are areas where both shine really well. Like the brush on the harness and the archer’s outfit. The technical pen is great on the broken lines, like where there is fur or shading.

      Erich von Hasseln
      https://ashcop-illustration.carbonmade.com/

      1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
      • Coreyartus
        Coreyartus Moderator last edited by

        Yes, I agree with @Eelwick --there's no reason why you can't use both. Many of the posters above have mentioned your expressive brush work and clean technical pen lines. Why not find a way to use the best of both worlds?

        Children's Illustration Portfolio: https://www.coreyartusillustration.com
        Art Portfolio: https://www.coreyartusimagery.com
        Mastodon: https://mindly.social/@Coreyartus
        Pixelfed: https://pixelfed.social/Coreyartus

        1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
        • deborah Haagenson
          deborah Haagenson last edited by

          A brush pen is hard to learn and control. I think you did a great job! I just bought a fine point brush pen so I hope that helps. In a class I took last year we used the pens you dip in ink. He had us do the drawing in a fine point first and then again with the larger point to add the heavyier lines. I don't know if that would work with brush pens though. I haven't tried it.

          Quackamos 1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
          • Quackamos
            Quackamos last edited by

            Thank you everyone! Yes, the brush pen is quite difficult to work with, but I really enjoy that expressiveness too; I haven't really thought of combining the two before though! Perhaps in certain areas tighter areas I can use the technical pen and then go over it with the brush pen. I like the tech. pens because their ease of control and speed, but the expressive lines I get with brush pen are just so fun.

            This just means more practicing and experimenting, thank you! 😂

            https://www.instagram.com/quackamos/
            Twitter - https://twitter.com/quackamos

            1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
            • Quackamos
              Quackamos @deborah Haagenson last edited by

              @deborah-Haagenson Thank you! I have also tried dip ink, though not recently; I think I was using the wrong paper because the nib kept scratching through the paper. But I think I'd like to try and combine the two styles if possible! (I have way too many pens I gotta use them!)

              https://www.instagram.com/quackamos/
              Twitter - https://twitter.com/quackamos

              1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
              • Johanna Kim
                Johanna Kim SVS OG last edited by

                Both drawings looks great. I definitely love your brush pen version more, though. It's so expressive and bold, and feels much more spontaneous and loose and alive. I bet if you did more drawings with brush pens, you would achieve the control you want. Personally, I love an occasional jiggly, wiggly, uneven line. Those little imperfections bring the warmth of traditionally made artwork.

                http://www.johannakim.com
                http://instagram.com/johannahkim/

                1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                • B
                  BreannaB last edited by

                  Both are beautiful! But I really like the style the brush pen adds! ❤️

                  1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                  • TessaW
                    TessaW last edited by

                    I like the brush pen image. For me it's better balanced between all of the elements and my eye travels between them pretty equally. It's also a really bold statement overall and the image jumps off of the screen more than the tech pen one. In the tech pen one, the dino's face is more delicately handled, making a bit more realistic looking compared to the more simple and graphic handling of the elf, and my eye wants to look at the dino face much more than anything else.

                    Great job, either way! Go for the pen that brings most enjoyment.

                    Website: www.tessawrathall.com

                    Instagram: www.instagram.com/tessawrathall_art/

                    1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                    • PriscillaA
                      PriscillaA last edited by

                      These are both wonderful! I’m always a fan of brush pen...anything with an interesting, varied line. I think it’s much stronger. Bravo!

                      1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                      • Eelwick
                        Eelwick last edited by

                        I think you might want to try a fountain pen at some point too.. I love using them myself.

                        Erich von Hasseln
                        https://ashcop-illustration.carbonmade.com/

                        1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                        • Mina Elly
                          Mina Elly last edited by

                          Personally, I like brush pen picture. It looks more clearly

                          1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                          • Enholm Molly
                            Enholm Molly last edited by

                            which comes with brush pen, look cool really omg
                            what (brush)pen did u use???

                            1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                            • First post
                              Last post