WIP - Nightfall Book interior - Your Feedback is greatly appreciated!

[cszoltan]

Hello Everyone,
I have been working on this continuation of my Nightfall Illustration project from February, very exited about how it came out, but there are still things to be polished or changed. A few Fresh Eyes would be greatly appreciated!
Please share your thoughts, what do you think?

The text is just a placeholder, one of my friends will be writing a little story for this illustration.
Thank you, and much Love to you all!

The Cover, from the February Contest:

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@cszoltan i love it. The monster’s expression in the first piece is just priceless.

[baileyvidler]

This looks very professional. I love the composition of the first image. Well done!

[Laurel Aylesworth]

@cszoltan Oh my gosh, I love his gummy smile.

[cszoltan]

@Laurel-Aylesworth @Nyrryl-Cadiz @baileymvidler Thank you everyone fro the feedback! I think it needs a bit more fine tuning with the characters, and after that I will call it finished!