I can’t seem to figure out how to post the video... I’ll take some process images and post them.

You're welcome ^^

@Heather-Boyd that’s very insightful. The intimacy is what’s missing from the kids.
This is the first time I’ve taken thumbnailjng seriously and it took me 9 iterations to get to the close cropped version! I finally see why they are important! I may try one of the kids in a similar close up format & then decide. Thank you!

@jthomas -Yeah, I think you summed up what's happening with the color pretty well-

An overall muted palette with bolder pops of color.

The balance of muted colors vs bolder colors changes from piece to piece, but that's the overall impression when we look at the dream portfolio as a whole.

I tend to go overboard with analyzing colors, using the eyedropper tool in photoshop to see what's happening with hue shifts, and with saturation/value percentages- but that's not necessarily going to be valuable to everyone. I'd only worry about it if you find yourself struggling with getting the colors to look the way you want them to.

@nyrrylcadiz @swordofodin @LauraA Thank you very much for the kid words! Yes, these sport illustrations were made for a credit union. They publish a bi-monthly newsletter for their kids club members.

@rcartwright 0_1542648778645_The slowest night of the year.jpg Almost time to work on the characters

I like your illustration! The seeds blowing through the air is a great image, I like how the girl's hair shows the same motion. I also like the bunnies watching her. Your illustration shows depth by progressively lightening and softening the colors. I think that was done really well.

I agree with previous comments about the tree gap on the far right.

I also think that the leaves on the closest tree need to have some darker shades like the trunk and grass below it.

Lastly the first hill ends right at the fence post, and I think it should extend a little beyond the post. Only because it seems strange on inspection.

Great work!