@Lee-White wow, I am so stoked and honored to have you critique my work. This really got the wheels turning in my head, because I was convinced that drawing a character model that was somewhat true to form when it comes to body proportions was impossible to then work into a more free inking style ala Quentin Blake and yourself, hence, why my inking merely stayed on track with the character design as well as my painting. What you did above really answered a huge dilemma I was having these past two weeks, which was how to incorporate all of the rules I was learning in the courses, yet still have the freedom that allows me to break rules wherever I want.
As for my painting: I totally understand what you are saying about painting in a fluid way. Prior to learning watercolor, I was using those really good markers (idk the name atm) and I felt like I was super fluid with those, but when I went to watercolor, I noticed that though I start out with the goal of painting very freely I end up tightening up out of fear of drenching the paper, as well as covering up a white area that I cannot recover. So I keep telling mhself that it is something that will come with time, and is why I am painting every day. This weekend I am going to shadow your luminous knight video, and paint along with it. I think that will really help me get a feel for what you are saying. I will post the results in this thread.
Thanks again for the help!!! I am a big fan, so it means a lot.