Sharing Inktober all month!Say your opinions!
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Day 9. Throw!
The mutated elf will either succeed in throwing his last fireball, or he ll get sliced by the fearless hero,while falling!
Tried a bunch of stuff with this one!
Critisize it if you wish!!
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@Georgios-Christopoulos These look really good and have a polished style to them. Your storytelling is very good. I personally like the words. It gives them a comic book feel more than a children's book, which is fitting for your style. Its also good practice for knowing where you would leave room for them if you were illustrating a comic.
One critique I would give is to vary your lines more. You have really thick lines for almost everything except for the inside details. Try using finer lines for receding objects like the trees. It will really help you create 3-D space in your work. Use the bold lines only for the closest objects. If all the lines are the same it can get overwhelming and you don't know where to look. Have you done @Jake-Parker 's inking 2.0 class? It is very helpful for inking lines and linework in general.
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@chrisaakins this is actually true! I have come to this conclusion myself! I actually tried it in the next piece, so check it out if you feel like it!
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Day 10 is up!
Pray!
The yound traveler with his trusty Jay came upon a man praying in front of the statue of an old goddess!
What do you think?
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@Georgios-Christopoulos
"Thanks for your comment lad!"
I think i can be your father at my age.
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@arielg oops! How old are you?
Instagram : https://www.instagram.com/g.chris.artwork/
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@Georgios-Christopoulos just 45
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@arielg more like a big brother then!! Cheers! (I am 30.)
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Day 11 is up!
What business does that little witch has in the old hags lair??What do you think??
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Day 12.
He sure dodged that bullet.
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day13.
Dune!!
Those three fellas stole from the wrong guy!
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Inktober day 14.
Armor.
He doesn't look so great now, does he..
His armor has seen better days. The same goes for his mentality.
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Days 15 through 31 will be uploaded here!!!
https://forum.svslearn.com/topic/10272/inktober-day-15-31-critiques-are-welcome
