@robbery Great start! Cool concept 🙂

would experiment with separating the outline of the head and the scene. see attached image.

Tone down the lined shading on the computer *Top Left

Vary the linework to bring the computer room forward.

I hope that helps.

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664079B6-B118-4799-8F9D-8FC654CE3462.jpeg Hey SVS people! What do you think of this thumbnail of some concept art for a short story I’m thinking of right now? Any critiques and comments are welcome! Thank you!

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Days 15 through 31 will be uploaded here!!!
https://forum.svslearn.com/topic/10272/inktober-day-15-31-critiques-are-welcome

@Georgios-Christopoulos I really enjoy this! Looks like its going to be a wonderful composition cant wait to see how it turns out

Hi @Georgios-Christopoulos, I like D the best!

@chrisaakins I agree, Thank you, this helps a lot!

@CesarAndradeArt Thank you Cesar! You've helped me a lot. Right now I'm practicing 24/7. Road to mastery. Can't wait to see more work from you. I have already checked your whole body of work. Thank you for the inspiration.

Cheers!

@StudioLooong Very interesting sight. Curious especially about the games--oh to have more hours in the day! Thank you for sharing.

@carriecopa Thank you Carrie! I appreciate the support 🙂

@Jake-Parker Thanks a lot jake!

@johntatulliart nice concept, I agree with @Jonathon-B. the background is a bit distracting. You can push up the contrast on the rabbit as well. that will help. Fun piece!