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Hi guys? Which layout do you think works better and feels most interesting ?

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  • Georgios Christopoulos
    Georgios Christopoulos last edited by 3 Mar 2020, 15:27

    @CLCanadyArts thanks for the feedback!!!

    @Rachel-Horne thanks so much for the opinion.what do you think of a combination between A and F. A layout with the connection they are trying to make on F?

    @cszoltan Great point.Thanks so much for this!!

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    • Rachel Horne
      Rachel Horne @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by 3 Mar 2020, 16:31

      @Georgios-Christopoulos yes I think that could work well - let us know what you decide!

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      • Heather Boyd
        Heather Boyd @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by 3 Mar 2020, 19:36

        @Georgios-Christopoulos

        I like E the best because you can create an expressive curved back gesture -emotionally sunken (heartbreak) along with the slop in his arm. I loved D but D felt more like "no please don't go" desperation instead of a sorrowful goodbye (letting her go) that I believe in E you have created. 🙂

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        • NessIllustration
          NessIllustration Pro last edited by 3 Mar 2020, 20:15

          @Georgios-Christopoulos I like A and B the most for conveying your concept and emotions. D is a really cool angle, but I feel the dynamism and lack of negative space detracts from the message you're trying to tell.

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          • cszoltan
            cszoltan @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by 3 Mar 2020, 22:20

            @Georgios-Christopoulos Sure, can`t wait to see the next phase.

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            • carriecopadraws
              carriecopadraws SVS OG last edited by 3 Mar 2020, 22:56

              I like B because it has a very clear communication of the emotion - separation, longing.

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              • Georgios Christopoulos
                Georgios Christopoulos last edited by 5 Mar 2020, 11:03

                @Heather-Boyd hey thanks so much for the opinion!!

                @NessIllustration I start to feel the same way about D.I think the sky as a negative space will really add to the overall concept!thanks for taking the time to say your opinion!

                @carriecopadraws thanks a lot!!

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                • Kim Hunter
                  Kim Hunter last edited by 5 Mar 2020, 14:18

                  The emotion in this scenario belongs to the elf. And D shows the strongest emotion so I'll go with D. The over the shoulder pov of the spirit also shows the weight of her value in the story.

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                  • Georgios Christopoulos
                    Georgios Christopoulos last edited by 6 Mar 2020, 09:01

                    @Kim-Hunter Thanks very much for the feedback Kim! You are awesome!

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                    • Jeremy Ross
                      Jeremy Ross @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by 7 Mar 2020, 20:46

                      Hi @Georgios-Christopoulos, I like D the best!

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