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    Hi guys? Which layout do you think works better and feels most interesting ?

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    • Georgios Christopoulos
      Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

      @CLCanadyArts thanks for the feedback!!!

      @Rachel-Horne thanks so much for the opinion.what do you think of a combination between A and F. A layout with the connection they are trying to make on F?

      @cszoltan Great point.Thanks so much for this!!

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      • Rachel Horne
        Rachel Horne @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

        @Georgios-Christopoulos yes I think that could work well - let us know what you decide!

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        • Heather Boyd
          Heather Boyd @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

          @Georgios-Christopoulos

          I like E the best because you can create an expressive curved back gesture -emotionally sunken (heartbreak) along with the slop in his arm. I loved D but D felt more like "no please don't go" desperation instead of a sorrowful goodbye (letting her go) that I believe in E you have created. 🙂

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          • NessIllustration
            NessIllustration Pro last edited by

            @Georgios-Christopoulos I like A and B the most for conveying your concept and emotions. D is a really cool angle, but I feel the dynamism and lack of negative space detracts from the message you're trying to tell.

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            • cszoltan
              cszoltan @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

              @Georgios-Christopoulos Sure, can`t wait to see the next phase.

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              • carriecopadraws
                carriecopadraws SVS OG last edited by

                I like B because it has a very clear communication of the emotion - separation, longing.

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                • Georgios Christopoulos
                  Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                  @Heather-Boyd hey thanks so much for the opinion!!

                  @NessIllustration I start to feel the same way about D.I think the sky as a negative space will really add to the overall concept!thanks for taking the time to say your opinion!

                  @carriecopadraws thanks a lot!!

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                  • Kim Hunter
                    Kim Hunter last edited by

                    The emotion in this scenario belongs to the elf. And D shows the strongest emotion so I'll go with D. The over the shoulder pov of the spirit also shows the weight of her value in the story.

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                    • Georgios Christopoulos
                      Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                      @Kim-Hunter Thanks very much for the feedback Kim! You are awesome!

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                      • Jeremy Ross
                        Jeremy Ross @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                        Hi @Georgios-Christopoulos, I like D the best!

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