@robbery Great start! Cool concept 🙂

would experiment with separating the outline of the head and the scene. see attached image.

Tone down the lined shading on the computer *Top Left

Vary the linework to bring the computer room forward.

I hope that helps.

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@miranda-hoover Thank you for the feedback!
I showed the drawing to a few family members and, from a distance, they couldn't make out where his arm was either; I think I need to put more effort into making sure the design remains visible/readable throughout the image, as all the small details of his arm really make it congested in certain areas, I think.

Thanks again!

@StudioLooong Very interesting sight. Curious especially about the games--oh to have more hours in the day! Thank you for sharing.