thumbnails for a book cover - what do you think?
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I had a hard time picking between these, I don't know what exactly this character or book is all about but they all look really promising!
They all have a different vibe to them and look like they tell slightly different versions of a story.
out of these however, I personally really liked c and d !
These thumbnails really made me stop and think about the story and the cover and the character and what they all mean!
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@doro_thea Okay, see the color choice for the suit makes more sense knowing that. I admittedly don't know much about princess stories, so I wouldn't have known about the yellow color of the attire at all. Oops!
And I didn't know that your Beast doesn't have horns per say. Either way, I would still think about exaggerating that part in your silhouette.
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@doro_thea Yes! I think the balance is much better. I'd probably tilt the line of the floor a bit more towards the right--but that's probably just me getting nit-picky.
Looking great
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@miranda-hoover Thank you! I'll also try the the tilting the floor, as I really like how your feedback influenced my design.
BTW tried out the rhino beast. And I am actually considering to rethink my line up, as i think it is so much fun
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@Jacy13 I will look into how to exaggarate the "horns". I think this is really good feedback that the silhouette needs to be more interesting...
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@krish-iyer Thank you so much for your opinion. What stood out for you on C and D? anything in specific?
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@doro_thea Really cool! Definitely makes it unique!
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@doro_thea is it just me or is the best really standing crooked?
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@doro_thea I liked that they were both simple and like representations of the characters and in a way open to interpretation, I liked the silhouette style of c and how simple and neat d was
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@Kori-Jensen yes, it is. will change
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@krish-iyer Thanks for the explanation, I was really drawn to the silhouette style as well, so maybe I will make a second version later on.
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@miranda-hoover Thanks for the great Idea
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I worked some more on it. Any final feedback before I call this finished?
And thanks for everyone who commented so far. I really appreciate your feedback! -
Very nice I like the single rose in the corner
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@miranda-hoover, @txels, @krish-iyer, @Jacy13, @Kori-Jensen and @powsupermum Thank you all for the feedback. I think this improved so much with all your input. Any last things that you think are irritating or need improving?
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That's looking great! It's simple but so good , It's like the mix of my two favorite thumbnails! Great work!
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looks amazing :D.
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@doro_thea I like G the most and H a bit because you have the silhouette of the beast once again. I just realized how late I am to the feedback party but no worries you've got great help!
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@doro_thea The only last couple of nitpicky things that I see are 1: there is a tangent where her shoes meet the shadow cast and 2: The texture you have kind of starts to make the face of your main character look a bit blurry. Other than those things, I think this cover is great! I think your beast's silhouette looks much better in this version. Perfect for a portfolio piece in my opinion
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@Jacy13 Thanks. good points. just had a quick touch up. finally I think it is final.
@Heather-Boyd Thanks for sharing your opinion anyways.
