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    thumbnails for a book cover - what do you think?

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      doro_thea @miranda-hoover last edited by

      @miranda-hoover Thank you! I'll also try the the tilting the floor, as I really like how your feedback influenced my design.

      BTW tried out the rhino beast. And I am actually considering to rethink my line up, as i think it is so much fun 😉 Untitled_Artwork.jpg

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        doro_thea @Jacy13 last edited by

        @Jacy13 I will look into how to exaggarate the "horns". I think this is really good feedback that the silhouette needs to be more interesting...

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          doro_thea @krish iyer last edited by

          @krish-iyer Thank you so much for your opinion. What stood out for you on C and D? anything in specific?

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            miranda-hoover @doro_thea last edited by

            @doro_thea Really cool! Definitely makes it unique!

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              Kori Jensen @doro_thea last edited by

              @doro_thea is it just me or is the best really standing crooked?

              https://daddydudeler.wixsite.com/portfolio

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                krish iyer @doro_thea last edited by

                @doro_thea I liked that they were both simple and like representations of the characters and in a way open to interpretation, I liked the silhouette style of c and how simple and neat d was

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                  doro_thea @Kori Jensen last edited by

                  @Kori-Jensen yes, it is. will change 😉

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                    doro_thea @krish iyer last edited by

                    @krish-iyer Thanks for the explanation, I was really drawn to the silhouette style as well, so maybe I will make a second version later on.

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                      doro_thea @miranda-hoover last edited by

                      @miranda-hoover Thanks for the great Idea 😉

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                        doro_thea last edited by

                        I worked some more on it. Any final feedback before I call this finished?
                        bookcoer.jpg
                        And thanks for everyone who commented so far. I really appreciate your feedback!

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                          Asyas_illos last edited by

                          Very nice I like the single rose in the corner

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                            doro_thea last edited by

                            @miranda-hoover, @txels, @krish-iyer, @Jacy13, @Kori-Jensen and @powsupermum Thank you all for the feedback. I think this improved so much with all your input. Any last things that you think are irritating or need improving?

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                              krish iyer last edited by

                              That's looking great! It's simple but so good , It's like the mix of my two favorite thumbnails! Great work!

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                                Kori Jensen last edited by

                                looks amazing :D.

                                https://daddydudeler.wixsite.com/portfolio

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                                  Heather Boyd @doro_thea last edited by Heather Boyd

                                  @doro_thea I like G the most and H a bit because you have the silhouette of the beast once again. I just realized how late I am to the feedback party but no worries you've got great help!

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                                    Jacy13 @doro_thea last edited by

                                    @doro_thea The only last couple of nitpicky things that I see are 1: there is a tangent where her shoes meet the shadow cast and 2: The texture you have kind of starts to make the face of your main character look a bit blurry. Other than those things, I think this cover is great! I think your beast's silhouette looks much better in this version. Perfect for a portfolio piece in my opinion 😃

                                    Deviantart: https://www.deviantart.com/jacy13
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                                      doro_thea @Jacy13 last edited by

                                      @Jacy13 Thanks. good points. just had a quick touch up. finally I think it is final. 😉 Beauty and beast book cover.jpg
                                      @Heather-Boyd Thanks for sharing your opinion anyways.

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                                        Jacy13 @doro_thea last edited by

                                        @doro_thea Yay! Great work 🙂

                                        Deviantart: https://www.deviantart.com/jacy13
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