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    Yeti WIP cooking spot or not?

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    • Tiffany Thomas
      Tiffany Thomas last edited by

      Hahaha, I love the "bit of cute"! I agree with @Casual-T, there's something really nice about the blue background. Maybe if you fade it out with a gradient or something on the top right, so it's not such a strong division between the background space. I think the key is having the image break open into the surrounding page. Really awesome piece!!!

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        Tamisha SVS OG last edited by

        The second is definitely a spot. Your illustration is great with or without the blue.

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        • Jeremiahbrown
          Jeremiahbrown last edited by

          Thank you everyone! @Tiffany-Thomas I'm definitely going to try your idea of fading it out, I like it! @Casual-T "blue it up" haha!

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          • Nyrryl  Cadiz
            Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Jeremiahbrown last edited by

            @Jeremiahbrown hehhehehe lolz 😂😂❤️😂

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            • Jeremiahbrown
              Jeremiahbrown last edited by

              Is this a happy medium or should I just stick with one or the other? Thank you for all of the feedback!
              Yeticook 1.jpg

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              • Tiffany Thomas
                Tiffany Thomas last edited by

                So I really think that deeper blue you have in the first image compliments the characters and allows them to pop more. They all look great, but in my opinion, I think if you can find some way to preserve the blue more, especially around the figures, it will help elevate your already awesome design. I did a quick mock up of your first one to try and show what I'm talking about (I hope that's okay?).fadedbackgroundexample.jpg

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                • Asyas_illos
                  Asyas_illos last edited by

                  I like your happy medium version I also like without any sky at all I think that it overall looks great

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                  • chrisaakins
                    chrisaakins last edited by

                    Is no one going to mention that he is cooking Pepe Le Pew?

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                    • Jeremiahbrown
                      Jeremiahbrown last edited by

                      One more version and I'll stop, haha. Is this a happier happy medium? I used took some of @Tiffany-Thomas' version. I may be splitting hairs at this point. Thank you all!
                      Yeticook 2.jpg

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                      • Jeremiahbrown
                        Jeremiahbrown @chrisaakins last edited by

                        @chrisaakins I was wondering if anyone would notice that😁

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                        • donnamakesart
                          donnamakesart last edited by

                          They actually included samples in their instagram post: https://www.instagram.com/p/CLSl7pMjgZa/?igshid=fjraxyuc30zp

                          I think your blue sky matches the 2nd photo in the link above 🙂

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                          • Jeremiahbrown
                            Jeremiahbrown @donnamakesart last edited by

                            @donnamakesart Thank you, I didn't notice that!

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                            • Tiffany Thomas
                              Tiffany Thomas @chrisaakins last edited by

                              @chrisaakins hahaha, I would have said something like "poor Pepe" but he seems to be totally okay with it, lol.

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                              • Tiffany Thomas
                                Tiffany Thomas @Jeremiahbrown last edited by

                                @Jeremiahbrown Yes! I like this one, it seems like the best compromise! I really love the cloud effect as a transition - also sort of give the feeling that they are up high on a mountain top. Such awesome and relatable characters!!!

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                                • Casual-T
                                  Casual-T @Jeremiahbrown last edited by

                                  @Jeremiahbrown That last version definitely rocks... Awesome work! These characters are just fantastic!

                                  I hope the publisher likes stick figures!!
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