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    Yeti WIP cooking spot or not?

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      Tamisha SVS OG last edited by

      The second is definitely a spot. Your illustration is great with or without the blue.

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      • Jeremiahbrown
        Jeremiahbrown last edited by

        Thank you everyone! @Tiffany-Thomas I'm definitely going to try your idea of fading it out, I like it! @Casual-T "blue it up" haha!

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        • Nyrryl  Cadiz
          Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Jeremiahbrown last edited by

          @Jeremiahbrown hehhehehe lolz 😂😂❤️😂

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          • Jeremiahbrown
            Jeremiahbrown last edited by

            Is this a happy medium or should I just stick with one or the other? Thank you for all of the feedback!
            Yeticook 1.jpg

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            • Tiffany Thomas
              Tiffany Thomas last edited by

              So I really think that deeper blue you have in the first image compliments the characters and allows them to pop more. They all look great, but in my opinion, I think if you can find some way to preserve the blue more, especially around the figures, it will help elevate your already awesome design. I did a quick mock up of your first one to try and show what I'm talking about (I hope that's okay?).fadedbackgroundexample.jpg

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              • Asyas_illos
                Asyas_illos last edited by

                I like your happy medium version I also like without any sky at all I think that it overall looks great

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                • chrisaakins
                  chrisaakins last edited by

                  Is no one going to mention that he is cooking Pepe Le Pew?

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                  • Jeremiahbrown
                    Jeremiahbrown last edited by

                    One more version and I'll stop, haha. Is this a happier happy medium? I used took some of @Tiffany-Thomas' version. I may be splitting hairs at this point. Thank you all!
                    Yeticook 2.jpg

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                    • Jeremiahbrown
                      Jeremiahbrown @chrisaakins last edited by

                      @chrisaakins I was wondering if anyone would notice that😁

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                      • donnamakesart
                        donnamakesart last edited by

                        They actually included samples in their instagram post: https://www.instagram.com/p/CLSl7pMjgZa/?igshid=fjraxyuc30zp

                        I think your blue sky matches the 2nd photo in the link above 🙂

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                        • Jeremiahbrown
                          Jeremiahbrown @donnamakesart last edited by

                          @donnamakesart Thank you, I didn't notice that!

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                          • Tiffany Thomas
                            Tiffany Thomas @chrisaakins last edited by

                            @chrisaakins hahaha, I would have said something like "poor Pepe" but he seems to be totally okay with it, lol.

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                            • Tiffany Thomas
                              Tiffany Thomas @Jeremiahbrown last edited by

                              @Jeremiahbrown Yes! I like this one, it seems like the best compromise! I really love the cloud effect as a transition - also sort of give the feeling that they are up high on a mountain top. Such awesome and relatable characters!!!

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                              • Casual-T
                                Casual-T @Jeremiahbrown last edited by

                                @Jeremiahbrown That last version definitely rocks... Awesome work! These characters are just fantastic!

                                I hope the publisher likes stick figures!!
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