March WIP - Kit or maybe Piper, the Lady Explorer

[Jacy13]

@baileyvidler I love the falconer concept! I think it does add to her overall story and gives her more character

As far as her hat goes, I think it looks good. I didn't read it as cowboy, but maybe some others can chime in and tell you what they initially thought.

I'm excited to see the finished piece!

[baileyvidler]

Thanks, @Jacy13! Plus, who doesn't love a good animal companion?

Glad to hear that it doesn't look like a cowboy hat to you! Maybe it'll look clearer once it's more cleaned-up!

[Niels]

@baileyvidler Now you said cowboy I can’t unsee it ;). It would be interested to see what multiple hat designs do to the ‘character’ of your character (does this sentence make sense in English?). A small thing though, and of course this is just a rough sketch, but it feels a bit like her hat is floating on top of her head instead of really on it.

[KevinTreaccar]

@baileyvidler My 2 cents: I didn’t see Cowboy until you said it and color can pretty easily distinguish between outfits that are pretty similar to begin with (cowboy and outdoor explorer/scientist). Just make sure you don’t have chaps and stick with a greener rather than browner outfit and it will lean more toward a forest environment instead of western desert aesthetic.

[baileyvidler]

@Niels Hah! As usual, I am the instrument of my own downfall! Thanks for the tip on the floating hat! I do that ALL the time, so I'll make sure to keep an eye on that.

@Kevintreaccar Good point about color! Although a shame on the chaps; I personally feel like chaps enhance EVERY character design!

[KevinTreaccar]

@baileyvidler Exactly. I want to remind Will Terry every time he’s building his list of what’s needed for a character – CHAPS!

[baileyvidler]

Progress! I'm trying to focus on making my characters less stiff, as that's a tendency of mine.

I did one version with a hat and one version without. I think I like the hat.

[Kevin Longueil]

@baileyvidler I like it with the hat too. Love the running pose!

[baileyvidler]

@Kevin-Longueil Haha, thanks! I think that was my favorite pose to draw. Nothing like an angry herd of wild pig-rhinos to get your cardio in!

[ruth]

@baileyvidler She's great! With the hat gets my vote! Don't forget to switch her arms in the running pose - opposite arms and legs

[baileyvidler]

@ruth Aaah, you're totally right! Thank you for catching that!

[jaepereira]

@ruth You beat me to it. The arms/legs in a running pose are pet peeve of mine.