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    March WIP - Kit or maybe Piper, the Lady Explorer

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    • baileyvidler
      baileyvidler @Jacy13 last edited by

      Thanks, @Jacy13! Plus, who doesn't love a good animal companion?

      Glad to hear that it doesn't look like a cowboy hat to you! Maybe it'll look clearer once it's more cleaned-up!

      Bailey Vidler
      Portfolio: baileyvidler.com

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      • Niels
        Niels @baileyvidler last edited by

        @baileyvidler Now you said cowboy I can’t unsee it ;). It would be interested to see what multiple hat designs do to the ‘character’ of your character (does this sentence make sense in English?). A small thing though, and of course this is just a rough sketch, but it feels a bit like her hat is floating on top of her head instead of really on it.

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        • KevinTreaccar
          KevinTreaccar @baileyvidler last edited by

          @baileyvidler My 2 cents: I didn’t see Cowboy until you said it and color can pretty easily distinguish between outfits that are pretty similar to begin with (cowboy and outdoor explorer/scientist). Just make sure you don’t have chaps and stick with a greener rather than browner outfit and it will lean more toward a forest environment instead of western desert aesthetic.

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          • baileyvidler
            baileyvidler @Niels last edited by

            @Niels Hah! As usual, I am the instrument of my own downfall! Thanks for the tip on the floating hat! I do that ALL the time, so I'll make sure to keep an eye on that.

            @Kevintreaccar Good point about color! Although a shame on the chaps; I personally feel like chaps enhance EVERY character design!

            Bailey Vidler
            Portfolio: baileyvidler.com

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            • KevinTreaccar
              KevinTreaccar @baileyvidler last edited by

              @baileyvidler Exactly. I want to remind Will Terry every time he’s building his list of what’s needed for a character – CHAPS!

              kevintreaccar.com
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              • baileyvidler
                baileyvidler last edited by

                Progress! I'm trying to focus on making my characters less stiff, as that's a tendency of mine.

                I did one version with a hat and one version without. I think I like the hat.

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                Bailey Vidler
                Portfolio: baileyvidler.com

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                • Kevin Longueil
                  Kevin Longueil SVS OG @baileyvidler last edited by

                  @baileyvidler I like it with the hat too. Love the running pose!

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                  • baileyvidler
                    baileyvidler @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                    @Kevin-Longueil Haha, thanks! I think that was my favorite pose to draw. Nothing like an angry herd of wild pig-rhinos to get your cardio in!

                    Bailey Vidler
                    Portfolio: baileyvidler.com

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                    • ruth
                      ruth @baileyvidler last edited by

                      @baileyvidler She's great! With the hat gets my vote! Don't forget to switch her arms in the running pose - opposite arms and legs 😉

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                      • baileyvidler
                        baileyvidler @ruth last edited by

                        @ruth Aaah, you're totally right! Thank you for catching that!

                        Bailey Vidler
                        Portfolio: baileyvidler.com

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                        • jaepereira
                          jaepereira SVS OG @ruth last edited by

                          @ruth You beat me to it. The arms/legs in a running pose are pet peeve of mine.

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